College Lessons - Comments

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I like that this story is from a guys point of view, which makes it interesting and unique from the start. The interactions between characters (especially Mikey and his family) are used to develop all of the characters personalities in a very sophisticated way. While this is not my usual ready, it kept me entertained =)

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I dont usually read the teen stories but I found that Mikey was a really well-written character. I like how he was close to his family and he was likeable, and that it was written from Mikey's POV compared the the usual third POV. It was well-written and I didn't see any problems right off the bat. I really liked this.

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As good as this story is, I have to admit it's not for me. That's no baring on you or your story, but it's the fact that I am in my 30s and don't tend to enjoy teenage stories anymore. having said that, you main character of Mikey is very likeable and relateable. That's not easy, but you have really pulled it off.

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I like the fact that it's through a guy's point of view. It's different and that alone sets it apart from other stories. This story in general is a bit unique and I like it.

One thing that I absolutely LOVE is how close he seems with his family. I try to write about strong families and you hit it right on the head.

This story is going places. Keep writing! (:

So I was brought here by comment swap, and while this isn't my usual read I found it extremely enjoyable. I love Mikey and dynamics between his family and his friends, and I absolutely LOVE the name Rawry. Your writing is great and while the language is harsh it's realistic. The only 'problem' per say I saw was a consistency thing. You kept mentioning how Mikey saw people from class, but classes hadn't started yet. Another thing, although this is just my personal opinion, is that Toni is usually spelled that way for a girls name, where Tony is the boys version, and I got confused for a second the first time I read it. Great story though, keep going.

I like that it's in a guy's perspective, considering that's extremely rare for het stories, so I think that gives your story that sort of unique stand-out-from-the-crowd feeling that's really good! :3

I'll admit, though, the summary is a little cheesy. For the most part, whenever there's a question in a summary, it's probably going to be yes, and it sort of ruins the suspense? Also, the rated whatever and copyright thing, I mean, they can see the rating so we can assume what's in it, and the copyright thing is sort of... pointless, haha. It doesn't really do anything.

I love the dynamic between him and his family, just the comfortable feeling that surrounds them you can tell they're close. Especially the grandma, usually people don't include grandparents in their stories so seeing her gives a warm sort of happy feel and I really like that. c:

It really made me sympathize for him when you described his lifestyle and I think that it really does open up well for the trust issues you mention in the summary. I think it's a good beginning, nothing really big happens though so I'll admit I'm not immediately immersed into the story, but it's a decent beginning and has potential.

Hey! Comment swap sent me here. When I first saw the name Mikey I thought it was a MCR fanfiction, and I get redirected to those a lot, but I was pleasantly surprised. This is a really interesting story. Heaven is so cute! Also, I think the language is harsh, yet effective--the plot elements you're touching on sort of correspond with that sort of language, you know what I mean? Anyways, I really do enjoy this, and I urge you--keep writing!

I thought that this was a very original piece, and it is very different from most things that I find myself reading. You used a great amount of detail in this, and I could tell that you spent a lot of time working on this. The characters were very real, and I saw one or two grammar errors regarding comma usage. Keep up the great work.

I really like this story. It is so different from all of the other stories I have read on here. I love the character Mikey and how you make him a goody boy kind of. He has a good heart and good intentions compared to his surroundings and his friends. You write this really well and at first I was like..woah the language here. Haha. But it goes really well with the rest of the story elements. Usually I do not like harsh language like that. 8) I am only a few chapters in but curious as to what race Mikey is? Is he white? Lol I get confused on that kind of thing. I can definitely tell Rawry is not. I also love all the names in this. Usually people use the same names over and over again like Sarah, Emma, or Jane. Those are the most popular ones I see. I like that your chapters are not that long. They are short and kind of to the point. I can definitely tell you think each chapter through. It is well constructed. Your layout is kind of boring, (not to offend) I know you have a picture in the background but I can’t tell what it really it is. I’m enjoying this story. 8)

The name Rawry is badass! lmao sorry for that language<<
Anyways, they story is genius, Update soon .
Oh & another thing, There was a few minor grammar issues and the layout looks kinda boring, I'm glad I stuck around cause the story is interesting!

I must say, the moment I read the name "Heaven" I instantly thought of a girl who was in one of my mum's classes named "Neveah" (Heaven backwards) who's mom was a crack whore and who knows where the father iss... but anyway, I really love your character's that you've created. Heaven is so cute, and Mikey reminds me of one of my best guy friends. And Rawry sounds totally sick!

Though it seemed a bit odd that in chapter one you said he had no friends, and then chapter two there's Rawry and then he talks about the five girls he'd dated.. Unless you meant that he had no friends as of current, then I can understand that.

There were a few grammar issues, one I caught on in the first chapter was that you said something along the lines of Mikey being handed over to Heaven, when it should be the other way around (I don't think Heaven is strong enough to carry Mikey hahah!)

God luck with this!!:)

love it, i really think you should continue because it is just suchhhhh a great ideaa. my only problem is the layout. the story is so good and it sucks you in, but the first thing you see is this dark blah boring layout. change it up! xo

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comment swap says i didn't comment but i totally did. lol. but yeah basically thats all i really think you should change is the layout. please continue :)

love itt. please please please continue. although i think you should make the layout more interesting, the story is so good but the layout just makes it look..boring.

Love it as always

This story is seriously fucking amazing.
Oh my god, Frank Ocean? Yeah, can't get any better than that.
You should write more on this story.
I absolutely love it a lot.
Oh & Kanye West? rad.
Please continue this.

I really think you should start writing this again if you do i will try to get you more readers please it really good and you have talent