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Gah, I want to know your secret to gorgeous layouts. This one is so simple and pretty. I’ll try not to stare at it for too long… anyway. I have actually never heard any of P!ATD’s music, so I don’t really know much about the band or that there even was a split. O.O So anyway. You know…there’s something about your writing that just makes everyone you write about seem so real. I mean, okay, that sounds stupid. (It’s nearly two in the morning here; I am allowed to ramble.) I mean…I know they’re real people, but…I know nothing about these people. You’ve made them so perfectly human that…yeah, I still can’t explain it. xD They just react perfectly and the dialogue is always so fabulous and…nope, I can’t do it. I can’t describe how awesome you are. I adored the whole thing in general, and as always there is nothing to concrit. xD

I almost wish Spencer would have refused him, but that’s just me being mean. xD

So, I really liked this. I've read a couple of fics that heave dealt with the band's split, but most of them were Rydens, so maybe that's why I liked this; because it was different. I really felt bad for Spencer the whole time because you could tell that he just missed Ryan. It's totally heartbreaking because a lot of the things you wrote about are true. How they were best friends growing up and know how they hardly talk, you know, things like that. It's so sad.

I really liked that Ryan came back in the end. I think it meant a lot to Spencer. It must have hurt Ryan a lot to have to read about one of his old best friends getting married on the internet. But maybe that's just the 'stab in the heart' that he needed to see things straight. And I thought it was so sweet when Spencer asked Ryan if there could be two best men in his wedding, aww. Super cute. I also like the use of the parentheses in the story. I thought that was good.

So yeah, I thought his was really nice and I loved the ending and your writing was very nice. :)