I love the title because it reminds me of a book by John Green called Paper Towns. That's really what made me click on this story. haha
A cynical intellect attains the unattainable, but it's not exactly what he wanted. You're summary is a bit hard to understand but after using an online dictionary and my brain I understood it. Also I love the song that you based it on.
And I suppose I am a liar if you're using what greeting cards and romance movies define as love as your belief as to what love is. I love your writing it's very descriptive and then at the same time not boring and overly wordy.
The whole first paragraph is amazing and I love how you worded every sentence. being the naive yet sweet girl she is, she probably thinks that love is exactly what I just denounced. She seems like a naive little girl while the narrator seems older and wiser.
As a whole, she was beautiful, but she didn't mean a thing to me. The last sentence kinda rocked my boat. Because until the last few paragraphs or so things seemed to be going pretty good according to me. Then he kinda slowly breaks it off. It was sad but that not a sob story because it wasn't shown off that way.
A cynical intellect attains the unattainable, but it's not exactly what he wanted. You're summary is a bit hard to understand but after using an online dictionary and my brain I understood it. Also I love the song that you based it on.
And I suppose I am a liar if you're using what greeting cards and romance movies define as love as your belief as to what love is. I love your writing it's very descriptive and then at the same time not boring and overly wordy.
The whole first paragraph is amazing and I love how you worded every sentence. being the naive yet sweet girl she is, she probably thinks that love is exactly what I just denounced. She seems like a naive little girl while the narrator seems older and wiser.
As a whole, she was beautiful, but she didn't mean a thing to me. The last sentence kinda rocked my boat. Because until the last few paragraphs or so things seemed to be going pretty good according to me. Then he kinda slowly breaks it off. It was sad but that not a sob story because it wasn't shown off that way.
A very interesting read.