Telescope Eyes - Comments

I'm really excited for this, but I'm wondering if you know of the song Telescope Eyes by Eisley.
I'm not sure if you do or not, but if not, you should check it out.
And once again, I'm going to say I'm loads excited.

This seems like it's going to be awesome!
I like that you did something different with her son being Eric's instead of John's like most stories go.
Post another chapter soon!!

I love this story so far. I also like the idea of rotating the chapter between past and present. I love stories that do that and not many do.

So Halvo is father to Colton? I feel like Halvo and Micah have something more than friends it seems. I just hope they really are just friends and that the kid isn't his so things with John will go more smoothly! I bet things won't go smoothly. I love it already!!

god, I love Casey already. what a great name. Maybe she could end up being garrett's sister.

Aaaah! I lovelovelove this!
Your writing is just wonderful.
and the layout is lovely. :3
gaaah I'm just so excited!

I reallyyy love this so far :)
Really well written and I can't wait to see what happens!
It'll probably blow up in her face, about not telling John about the baby, but regardless, I enjoyed the first chapter very very much!
update sooonnn :)