Telescope Eyes - Comments

Sorry. Touch screen phone.... Anyways. I sat there for like five minutes, jaw dropped and arms flailing. I'm excited to see him as a dad though. :)

Just discovered this story. And I LOVE it!!! I was extremely shocked to find out Halvo wasn't the father and that John was. I literally sat there for like five m

Why was Eric being so sassy? He's supposed to be the sweet one and then I found out that he cheated on Micah after calling her a cock tease and now he's getting an attitude. Killin' me.
John finally knows...it was actually a lot less dramatic than I thought it would be. That was good though. I love that he wants to be a part of Colton's life but I'm just wondering what's going to happen once everyone else finds out and when Eric gets back from tour.

FINALLY they get to talk! love this story! :)

Absolutely loved this update! I almost cried at one point, John's vulnerability making me feel for him. I just know he will be a great dad and cannot wait for everything to be out in the open. So they can be a family. Still very much Team John. :)

well, well, well... John kinda looks like a hero here. Nice little changes and additions. And actual update. Huh. Who know you could do it. =)

So it took me 2 days to read this story and i have NO idea why i waited so long. This story is honestly amazing and your writing skills are SUPERB. My heart was aching this whole chapter (and perhaps the last few as well...maybe the whole story actually?). As much as I love Halvo and think he is sweet it is clear that Micah and John are meant to be together. I really hope that they can be a happy family, he deserves that completely. Okay im going to stop gushing over this now....

john is just gonna be such an amazing dad :3
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Aw I'm so glad John is going to be in Colton's life! I'm kind of wary about Eric's behavior in this chapter.. I feel like something bad is going to happen with him and Micah. Which oddly I kinda want because I want Micah to be with John so they can have a cute little family together.

Awww that was so adorable. I lied when I said that last chapter was my favorite. This definitely was! Yay stoked for the next chapter. Things are finally looking up, I'm glad (:

Aw, I'm so glad that John wants to be a dad to Colton!
I can't wait for more updates!!

oh man. I'm not gonna lie when I say I almost cried in this chapter. I felt so bad for John.
But anyway, great job! Looking forward to more updates soon!

so glad you updated! this chapter was great, I'm not so keen on Eric anymore though haha

And so he knows!! Nicely written :) John being a dad :3 aww man

oh my GOD. I don't care, that chapter was worth the wait. I don't know were to begin, I know this is all fanfiction but HALVO my god. okay, yeah and Micah and John need to be together. Okay i've vented my feelings towards this chapter, it was great! seriously can't wait to see what happens next.

This was such a good chapter although I'm a bit upset that Eric did that to her. Addison doesn't surprise me...I could tell she was a slut from the beginning. But Eric's just so darn sweet and everything now. I think Micah will end up back with Eric which wll break John's heart even more.

Well apparently Eric was a d-bag before, but I guess what he's doing for Micah in the present time totally makes up for it. Can't wait for the next update!

aw :( i think both girls helped break his heart, but i think most of it came from micah. i hope she does get together with john, but i'm thinking she won't.
great update! i can't wait to see what happens next.

I will marry you. I will be your slave if you update this. It is my absolute favorite story on mibba and I need more! C;

Micah DEFINITELY just broke John's heart. Sure, he cared about Addie, but it seems like he never cared enough. He did try, though. I just feel terrible for Micah because while she was going out with Halvo, she liked John just a bit, then Halvo goes and makes out with Addie. I just don't see why he has to have sex from her either. Just like, chill, you're in high school. I don't know how I feel about Micah and Halvo... I want them together but at the same time not. I'm just too conflicted right now.