This story is really impressive. I couldn't even imagine watching someone lose their sight.
The mental image of her appearance, carelessly unmemorized by the arrogant years I took for granted, were disappearing as I tried my hardest to imagine her.
This is one of my favorite lines. So far all I see is heartache and like you said in your story 'shame.' I can't imagine what you'll write next.
The mental image of her appearance, carelessly unmemorized by the arrogant years I took for granted, were disappearing as I tried my hardest to imagine her.
This is one of my favorite lines. So far all I see is heartache and like you said in your story 'shame.' I can't imagine what you'll write next.