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Kendall :D love him so much
I was reading the comments above and it says its sad
so I am a bit worreid to read this...
I really like the picture you used for the banner as well
it shows that he's in thought, which is probabaly something that'll tie into the story
aww it's about Jo :3 they're so cute together!
but it seems hes like in pain. like his mind can't focus on anything but her
oh... she's gone D: that's so sad! I thought they would be together forever kinda thing
the way he explains her is so cute <3
I like how you used an analogy of his real life
especially something that was as cute as ap resent to his mom :3
oh, they broke up mutually. but I cna tell he can't stand it
I can tell he's regretting it, and that he misses her like crazy
and she's with someone else alreayd! that's what's really getting him down
gosh I just want to go into this story and hug him!
this was such a sad one shot, but it was still so sweet
I really liked it though, amazing <3

That's so sad :(

Okay, first things first. Poor Kendall.... That's so sad. The last two paragraphs made me kinda frowny. I totally love the metaphoric comparison between Kendall's fallen apart life and the first grade Popsicle project. That's so creative and it actually made things easier like my history teacher. It's like even if people didn't understand how Kendall was feeling, you showed a very important example that made it easier for readers to comprehend the Character's feelings. I like that. And aw, Jo is okay with breaking up with Kendall and then goes for Jett?? That's sad. Oh well, this is truly touching and makes me think about what I have and questioning if I'm kind of taking things for granted.