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  • BSMSGIRL08

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    Omg! I have been here since the beginning! I can't believe it's been six years!! I'm so sad to see it go but I'm happy I stayed around! (:
    June 10th, 2013 at 12:23am
  • divinetacos

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    Read the first chapter....and I am already in love with the story!!! :D
    March 7th, 2013 at 07:25am
  • dmbbmb123

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    getting impatient for the wedding lol, even if its not real
    February 18th, 2013 at 09:44pm
  • lcleary777

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    Great~ (:
    January 9th, 2013 at 08:15am
  • BSMSGIRL08

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    Love it! (:
    November 17th, 2012 at 05:50am
  • theworstthingsinlife

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    i love it, keep going
    November 1st, 2012 at 06:49pm
  • BlueEyedAngel2

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    Love this story!!! Need more!! Am prego it's a craving, don't deny me plz more!!!!!!!
    October 8th, 2012 at 03:55am
  • discoveringclouds

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    Wow chapter 15 has way too many swear words and dirty conversations that don't have any meaning. I'll have to stop reading here, I don't see the point of the conversations anymore.
    July 29th, 2012 at 09:49am
  • discoveringclouds

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    Hey your story is pretty interesting, and your layout is hilarious. You should focus on developing your characters a bit more and remove the swearing. Swearing takes away from the story. It's like a sharp punch that pushes the reader right out. Also the amount of swearing shows a limited vocabulary. Either the characters or you, but it's okay, you can always just use a thesaurus or look up words. :)

    Gentle* Chapter 5 correction. The word you used is...something you wouldn't be too happy knowing you used.

    Edit your story and it will become more awesome. All the best.
    July 29th, 2012 at 05:18am
  • Sdm013

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    Please update!!!! :-D
    July 15th, 2012 at 05:47am
  • MeIsThalia

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    love it! update soon please
    July 10th, 2012 at 08:21am
  • BSMSGIRL08

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    Missed this! I know she's upset about having to get married but the opportunity she has now she needs to realize that lol (:
    June 14th, 2012 at 11:47pm
  • bazil717

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    I love this story soooooooo much! Its so cute! I just found it and I hope you update really soon!
    May 25th, 2012 at 07:03pm
  • BSMSGIRL08

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    I love this story!! I just found it! I can't wait for the next update!! (:
    April 21st, 2012 at 05:52am
  • SweetCyanide93

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    okay so I stayed up till 3:43 A.M. reading the whole thing cause I couldn't stop.
    This is amazing I love it!
    update soon!
    April 4th, 2012 at 10:59pm
  • shellieann

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    Great story. update soon, please.
    November 28th, 2011 at 07:35am
  • halpolo565

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    Amazing!! you should make a little chapter of what the future brings... :)
    November 26th, 2011 at 09:19am
  • n.oxious

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    pssst
    hey
    you know what you should do??
    you should update
    soon
    mhmm
    mhmm
    November 12th, 2011 at 05:44pm
  • NickiCheers

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    I honestly love this story! Keep it up! :D update soon?
    November 3rd, 2011 at 02:49am
  • ElyRae

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    Great update! I like that they're getting to know each other, even if James is drunk :D

    Can't wait for the next update!
    October 26th, 2011 at 11:56am
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