Moving On - Comments

I'm sad to see this story is over, but it was indeed a very crazy ride while it lasted. The ending was perfect, i couldn't see it ending any other way. I'm happy that Annie finally got her happy ending with Carson. He's a cool guy and I'm happy as hell to see that they've been going strong for so long

Aww, it's all over :( But like you said, it had a good run.

Just for clarification, I was that reader, right? haha. That scene where Annie told Brian he'd always be her number one guy was really sweet. I resent their relationship :/ And Aww, her and Carson lasted! Score! I think the scene with them being together was a good way to end it just because she experienced so many traumatic things revolving sex as a young girl that you would think she'd have a hard time ever being with someone that way, but she found a good choice in Carson :)

Little Annie's all grown up. Tear :'(

what what! comment numba five!!! holla!!!!!

haha, ok, my ghetto moment is out of the way.

I cannot tell you how much I absolutely freaking LOVED this chapter. Just reading it had me smiling like a fool the whole time! Their family interactions were so amazing, it made me feel like I was part of it. Annie shunning herself for those two weeks was totally understandable-she went through some traumatic stuff, she had a right to lock herself away and cry about it for a while. But its good that at least she decided to be around her family. Nothing makes you smile more than a large, loud family (trust me I should know) and boy is that family large. Those guys sure do like to procreate and with five of them, that is a shit load of kids running around. But I have to say Carson and Annie are my fave. They were seriously soooooooo adorable together! I LOVE CARSON!!!! And he gets along so well with her sisters and her cousins, and even her protective uncles liked him. That water gun fight was so awesome, I think the fact that he was on their team was my fave part of that scene. Too precious, just having your boyfriend hang out with you and your family :) The scene in her bedroom was cute too. Yay to her getting her perfect first kiss! I can't believe Kyle had the audacity to show up at her house though! I am sorta curious as to what he could possibly say, but at the same time so don't care and am so glad he got his ass kicked by Carson. You go boy! Defend your girl! haha. The realization McKenna made Brian have about Carson being the one to help Annie through that moment was brilliant too. Just, GAH! This whole chapter! I can't wait for the final installment (it better be up tomorrow like you promised -_-) where Brian gives Carson the 3rd degree but ends up giving him permission to date Annie anyways because everyone loves him :D

Ok, so I think this comment should make up for my uncharacteristically short one last time :P LOVED IT!!!! <3

Jimmy with the water guns, lmfao :D
i did get confused with all those kids at first because i dint wanna go back an read whos kids were whos but i did so it was all good in the end
GO CARSON!! kicks some ass :D
Annie an carson, soo cute [':
Two more people need to comment after me!! D:
fucking loved the update btw, (;
You're Not Alone was an amazing story an this one is just as great (:
I cannot wait for the next update :p

i think i officially love carson

Favorite part had to be with Jimmy and water guns, that man is nuts lol! I loved this update, everyone gets along great together and Carson is so kick ass! He's a good guy so far and i like him a lot. I love how Michelle makes her quick smart ass remarks to brian, it's too damn funny

Go Carson!

I love the way you write your characters...they're so believable, and their interactions are so real. I can relate to Annie and it's hard to open up to someone, but once you do, it's the best feeling in the world. I can't wait to see more of this!

Oh and Kyle better watch his back..Brian may be lurking in a bush at an unexpected moment...

Kyle better sleep with one eye open...

Sorry, I would write a longer comment but I have to get to class...loved it and can't wait for the next part next weekend!

Awesome!! :D

love it more sooooooooooooooooooooon please

I hate Kyle, he just seemed like a major ass from the start. For her first prom i wish she would have went with Carson, he seems like a really nice guy. Man i know brian is going to make Kyle's life hell

I didn't trust Kyle from the start..he just gave me a bad vibe. I really wish she could've enjoyed her first prom and, since she's a teenager especially, school is going to be so hard for her to return to. I want to see her dad bring Kyle down and ruin his life as he ruined hers. He's naught but a jerk.