About two years ago, I would have said that in Cass' situation, I would have kicked him out on his ass a long time ago. I would have judged her for being too weak to stand up for herself and their relationship. But then my boyfriend left me for another girl, without even bothering to tell me we were over. A year later he came back and apologized, and I took him back. So I get how she feels. How hard it is to turn them away for hurting you, when it hurts just as bad to push them away. I just hope he cares about her enough to commit to her, and only her. :(
Ugh! I was not expecting a marriage proposal to be brought up but it was a very nice surprise. I cannot wait for your next update and maybe a confrontation between Jordan and Cassie. You're AMAZING!
I likey - though I wasn't expecting Jordan to talk to Matt about wanting to marry Cassie. A very emotionally filled chapter - I was going to suggest maybe a bit more dialogue between Cassie and Danny (nothing sexual, just talking, maybe have him comfort her). Also thinking about Cassie talking to Danny about her true feelings for Jordan (ik they're dating, but perhaps talking it out might help). These are just my suggestions - you don't have to take them to heart, just putting in my 2 cents.
Please update this more! It's fucking awesome! And oh my god, that was one of the smuttiest things I've ever read, kick ass! PLEASE UPDATE MORE! Wow, I feel like a whore begging for more.