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  • munchkiin1

    munchkiin1 (100)

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    :) I'm a bit of a ghost addict. Love paranormal stuff, even though I don't really believe in it. I like this story so far. Clean and focused and not all over the place like most 'wanna-be ghost stories.' Great job:)

    I have a ghost story also. It's not like yours but the characters are a bit the same :P
    I would love to read more!
    hugz&skittles.

    [munchkiin]
    February 24th, 2011 at 07:12pm
  • Eimie

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    So far I do like this story, it's good. I like that the title is a song haha and a great song at that.

    I can't say much about this since it's just chapter one. I will say a bit though, I like how focused it is. The main character is likeable and realistic. There's the right amount of telling and showing, overall good start to the story.
    February 24th, 2011 at 07:03pm
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