So I Run - Comments

Just like that guy you met a couple of years ago! What ever became of him anyway?

So, something that I'm to sure if it was really intentional but really stuck out to me: Melody dress. Too much around here, I think we get into the stigma that you have to be a social outcast, who dresses like a stereotype in order to have a personality. And yet, Melody is dressed in the current fashion, with manicured nails, and she's not an evil bitch. XD I like that.

I also like that her name is Melody after she seems to have an almost musical air about her. It was very fitting.

I love this story so much!

i love it so far!!! you should keep going with it upload soon :)

You should set the pictures into each of their respective chapters. I think that would be wicked cool! Yes, I just said wicked cool. I felt that it fit.

Your very own Tail Lights story! Yay! You should totally have her run into Genevieve and David or something. XD

I really can't help but feel bad for her mother and step-father. You don't give a whole lot for what they're like, but just the thought of waking up to the sound of a vehicle, and realizing that it's someone you love taking off with no explanation. As much as I can relate to Jessa's need for adventure and spontaneity, I just would never, ever, want that to happen to me.

I have to say, when she was listing off how much better her life was going to be on the road, I really wanted it to start just down pouring or something. Like, She was leaving behind this small, suburban life with so much pointlessness wrapped up into it and she was following her dreams. And then there was a flash of lightening, a crack of thunder, and water began to pour down on her head. >.<

Really liking this already! Is it the one you're doing for that obscene amount of chapters contest? Because then I'm definitely excited, thinking off everything she'll do.

I really liked this! It was very descriptive, and it's keeping me wondering and guessing. It's amazing. I like how you used one of the pictures for the layout, that was interesting. The layout is awesome, also. My favorite thing about the description is the calendar. That is an amazing idea and I haven't seen anyone else do that. I really like the story! Keep it up!