Temper Trap - Comments

  • O_O So you told me to read some of your stories since you commented on one of mine, but what you didn't tell me was how AMAZING YOUR WRITING WAS GOING TO BE!!!!!
    I mean yeah there are a few spelling errors here and there but honestly even the best writers have them.
    Although with some of the characters I got confused with, but it might have been just me because in the end I might have figured it out.
    You are going to continue on with this story right? Cause if you aren't i will virtually slap you. Not to be rude or anything =)
    What I really like so far about this story was the prologue. It was suspensful and when it said that she dies I was like O_O "No way" *is compelled to read more*
    But yes, it was and is amazingly amazing so far. =) Keep up the good work and I expect to read more soon!!
    May 15th, 2011 at 01:46am