Despite What They Say - Comments

I really like this. It's written simply, but well. The descriptions are really good and I like how you described their relationship. This was really interesting to read and I think you did a great job writing it.

i really liked the way this was written. i like how the quote was only the inspiration for the story and that it wasn't like the girl kept saying it or thinking it.
This isn't the kind of thing i expected from this quote, but i see perfectly why you did it and i really love it. I'm also really glad that there's not a lot of pointless dialogue because i feel as if somehting like that in this story would really take away form the overall effect.
It was kind of short, but the length was very well-fitting to the sotry and i don't know if it would have been as good as it is if it were much longer.
i overall really did like this story. it was greatly written and sucken me right in. ^.^ (i was going to say 'simply amazing' but i just saw that houglass said that, so i won't) this was utterly wonderful.

I have never read anything like this before. There was at least one little spelling error that I recall, but it wasn't enough to dwell upon. This is simply beuatiful and haunting. It is amazing. You executed this brilliantly. I believe this girl. I think she's crazy and yet at the same time, I see this love that is different and twisted and beautiful. It's simply amazing.

Wow sweetie.
Really... wow. It was amazing.
The layout is pretty.
The story is original and sent shivers down my spine.