Of Which Night Can Only Dream - Comments

  • Fandango

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    So lovely and fluffy, yet it made me ache Clap
    November 4th, 2012 at 06:28pm
  • This.Useless.Heart.

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    So, I really love your drabbles, and I especially enjoyed this one. The way you described everything was amazing, specifically I thought the characterization was spot on. I loved how you highlighted how they were different and how they sort of weren't (like the bit about being different pieces from different jigsaws but still fitting. I loved that.)
    Probably the best example of everything I loved about this drabble is represented by this part:
    Both boys roll over to look at each other, leaving the stars to their games of charades – bear, hunter, fish, bull, ram, water-carrier… Blaine doesn’t see any point to them. He can’t understand why a few stars in a line can be a pair of twins, but Kurt thinks it’s romantic. Blaine can spot his own pictures if he wants to.
    First of all, that's such a great way to describe constellations! Secondly, it was a great way to point out the way each of them thinks.
    So...great work, yeah. :D
    May 27th, 2011 at 08:08am
  • Madthirst

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    The fit of their bodies isn’t perfect, but still perfect in its imperfection this line really hit me there.
    I just adore this one-shot. I love the beginning, the ending (I actually laughed along with them), and the middle. In short I just love it all in all. Keep up the very good work :D
    April 10th, 2011 at 11:19am
  • Teenage Dirtbag.

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    KSJDJFKHJKHSKGDKG THIS IS PERFECT. I'm looking over it and trying to pick out my favourite lines, but it's impossible because I adored all of it. I love your writing style- it's simple, but so beautiful and effective. You don't try or need to use overly fancy language to get the story across and make the reader feel something, which I really admire. You should be proud of this. <3
    March 30th, 2011 at 12:07am
  • pezzie

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    Talk about adorable! Oh my gosh, I had the hugest and most goofiest smile on my face the whole time I read this. Despite the fact that I've only watched like the first 2 or 3 episodes of Glee, Klaine is actually one of my favorite couples. Is that weird? Haha.

    Anyway! This was so cute and amazing and well written. It was like a moment in time and you captured it perfectly. It was so sweet and it just made me feel good inside. I also thing it’s extremely sweet that Blaine takes off his jacket for Kurt in the beginning. And I love how Kurt interwinted his fingeres in Blaine’s hair and then it was describing like the hair gel and who knows what else. I love little details like that.

    Good job! I loved it! :]]]]
    March 26th, 2011 at 11:20pm
  • Em'ly

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    I'm dipping my toes in new water by reading this, and I'm am pleasantly content with my choice. I love the simplicity of your writing, which is what captured me most.
    Your way of writing romance really gets me, like it's awkward just like they're supposed to be. The jigsaw puzzle piece analogy really struck that idea home. All in all, I'm very happy I read this.
    March 20th, 2011 at 10:42pm
  • raven kassidie.

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    Even though I have no idea who the characters are, this just made me go 'awwwh<3'.
    It was probably one of the most romantic one-shots I've ever read.
    Amazing work <3
    March 17th, 2011 at 11:09pm
  • koala tea.

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    I love Glee. And I love Kurt, and I love Blaine. And I love Kurt and Blaine together.

    And I love this piece of work you've created. I read it about three times, and played Candles for two of those times while reading it. You've depicted a moment of rare bliss, a moment in time all us humans crave, and need. And honestly, you did it flawlessly. I have no constructive crit to give you, because there is none needed. I'd say more, only I'd be going around in circles. I will have to favorite this. Stunning.

    (my favorite part: Their torsos are touching and each can feel the familiar warmth that is human flesh, human heartbeat, radiating from the other.)
    March 17th, 2011 at 02:20am
  • bucky barnes.

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    Kurt + Blaine = endless love. I recently just got into watching Glee and so since I'm all caught up with every episode, I was more than happy to find out that this was a Klaine story. And not just any Klaine story - THE cutest little Klaine story ever.

    In my oh so humble opinion, you captured each of their personalities to the T, which is amazing considering there isn't a lot of dialogue to maneuver around with. But you managed to convey their differing personalities through the little tidbits of info, like the part where Kurt thinks the stars and the shapes are romantic but Blaine just sees...well, dots in the sky.

    And the layout was equally beautiful - it didn't distract from the actual story but it still fit so well.

    Now all that needs to happen is for Kurt and Blaine to actually be together in the show. Lol.

    For real though, I adored reading this <3 You wrote this brilliantly :)
    March 14th, 2011 at 09:41pm
  • aubs

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    I want to say two things before I begin commenting on the story content itself. One, I really adore the layout - it is simple but it really connects with the picture and the story itself. And two, I am not a fan of Glee so I have no idea who Kurt and Blaine are, but I don't think my lack of knowledge takes away from the story.

    I thought, overall, that this was such a cute drabble. The relationship between Kurt and Blaire is really adorable even though they are so different.

    He can’t understand why a few stars in a line can be a pair of twins, but Kurt thinks it’s romantic.

    I really loved this line because it really shows how different the two boys are. Anyway, as I said before, I thought this was a super adorable drabble.
    March 14th, 2011 at 12:30am
  • tiffany danielle

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    This is by Roseh? SJFKJSF. You already know it's going to be brilliant and amazing. No question. Cause she's the bestest. (;

    I really like the layout, btw. It's all starry and gorgeous. :) <33

    "Time means nothing."

    I really liked this line. (: <33 It's so deep in such few words. <3

    Both boys roll over to look at each other, leaving the stars to their games of charades – bear, hunter, fish, bull, ram, water-carrier…

    I think I love you, k?
    Kay. :) <33

    kljdfjdkjkd. This was adorable. <33 On like, so many levels. It was nicely written, with just enough cutsey and not so cutsey detail. I loved it. Like, it was so sweet, I think my heart is buzzing on a sugar rush, teehee.<33

    You did an amazing job, dearie. :) <3
    March 13th, 2011 at 10:52pm
  • purple haze.

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    I realised this was Glee half way through, but I enjoyed it regardless - it was easy to read as original fiction.
    I loved the description, you made it all sweet and fluffy <3
    You have such a stunning writing style <3
    I'll have to read more of your stuff [:
    March 12th, 2011 at 05:19pm
  • champion;

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    I read this as original fiction, and someone else's comment told me this was glee.
    It was good, in a (good) silly romantic kind of way. It had nice description and good effort, and it easily painted a picture in my mind. Amazing job.
    March 10th, 2011 at 10:48pm
  • butterfly.kisses.

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    I love the layout and the banner. It's simple. almost like how I feel Kurt wanted things to be that night. The whole story was beautiful and touching. I really liked and I wish you would make this into a series.

    "The fit of their bodies isn’t perfect, but still perfect in its imperfection – like two pieces from a different jigsaw that, when forced together, make a new, completely original piece of some kind of abstract art." I've never thought of a relationship like this, but it brings a whole new meaning.

    All in all, I loved this!
    March 10th, 2011 at 07:45pm
  • whiskey rivers.

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    I'm not typically a fan of slash, or Glee, but I must say, this is adorable. Every little piece of it, from the gesture of the jacket to the star-gazing, is just absolute perfection. It's romantic without being cheesy,sexual but still subtle. It's rare that I find an author that gets the perfect combination of sensual and endearing just right, just enough to make me root for their characters at the end.

    Excellent, excellent work. (:
    March 8th, 2011 at 11:35pm
  • Fantasy Monroe

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    Love the layout :)
    Wow, that was amazing.
    I really love the summary, its sweet and it had me hook.
    The way you describe every detail was great, to the point I could picture it happening.
    It was sweet and cute, but not cliche which is good, I dont like stories thats really cliche, to me it ruins the story.
    Overall this was amazing :)
    March 7th, 2011 at 10:45pm