First, I would like to comment on the fact that you have a very unique writing style- one that most writers envy. But this entry was very run-on, almost rushed sounding, and in some parts, it was like grammar didn't even exist. I didn't particularly enjoy all the cussing, but I understand when I read entries for my contests that everyone has their own styles of writing and everyone comes from different backgrounds, so I WILL NOT count any points off for that. However, you have the potential to be an amazing writer. I can tell from just this one story that your vocabulary and imagination are both vast. I will most definitely be reading more of your work!
June 25th, 2011 at 07:55am