This Masterpiece Will Fall Apart - Comments

And it ended with a wedding. How cliche, but you pulled it off well, keeping the heart and the humor of the story right up until the end.
I love/hate it when the groom tears up. At my brother's wedding, I was totally fine until he got all teary-eyed. Then I did, and I wound up with the best man trying to offer me a tissue from across the aisle. He was cool about it, though. Just kind of let me know that he had one for me. It wasn't like he reached over and handed it to me, because that would have been awkward in front of everyone.
Anyways, I loved the wedding scene. Their vows were so cute!

Aw Josh couldn't have repaid Zach in a sweeter way. That was so cute.

Addicted doesn't even cover how I feel about this story O.o
I need more :3

Aww I knew he would forgive her. He just had to!
Me and my friend do the "no capes" thing all the time. We're super cool and make references to cartoon movies all the time. You should hear our WALL-E voices lol.

ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!???!!!!?!?!?!?
It was all starting to get a little easier and then you blindsided me! Rude!!
I think I'm going to have an aneurism if I keep reading this story. I can't take it!!! Lol.

So I cracked. I read it. And I was not prepared for it. You're the devil, you know that?

Everyone gets drunk and does stupid things, but I have to say that I'm on Josh's side for this one. Cheating is a deal breaker. Especially when he was so upset beforehand. This whole scenario is just awful. But yeah, if I had to pick sides, my sympathies are with Josh.

Side note: thank you for not having her sleep with John. I would have blown a gasket.

I loved the slang argument. I love my Newfie friends so much, and when I worked with too many of them at once I would come home and speak like them without even realizing it. My sister started yelling at me one day when we were talking on the phone and I called her b'y and asked where she was to. It really wasn't on purpose. I was the only person at that job that wasn't from Newfoundland.

Your author's note made me feel queasy. Please don't do anything you'll regret. Or I'll regret. Or anything that will make me sad. I've been sad too much lately, and I already know that this week won't be any better. So yes, I am using my tragedy to guilt trip you into rethinking whatever horrible thing you are about to write lol.

"It rains a lot there." Says the guy who lives in Vancouver. I liked this update. Every couple gets into stupid fights. It's the way of the world. Once, my mom broke a cupboard door in half because she slammed it so hard (the beginning of the chapter reminded me of that) and they had to stop fighting because my dad had to fix it before my siblings and I came home so that we wouldn't know they had a fight. I just found out about it this past summer lol.

And I made Sims of the band once. They lived in the same house. But I have a habit of turning the game on and getting distracted and leaving it running so my Sims run their own lives. Matt and Mike started dating without my permission. It was weird, and my computer crashed right after. I did not reinstall the game. I took it as a sign hahaha. So whatever you do, don't make them live together. Also, Matt as a politician woud be both awesome and awful. Damn him for not sending me a pug pillow! He would make it mandatory for ham to be eaten at all major holidays. I love ham!

And so, to sum up this excruciatingly long comment, this was a nice chapter that made Josh and Jaws relatable and believable. I liked it a lot.

Hahaha I laughed at Zack trying to describe Stephanie's boyfriend... guy friend... person of the male gender that she's sort of seeing...
And what crawled up Josh's butt and died? I don't like it when they fight!! Lol.

I laughed at Zack saying that he wasn't like Josh when Josline mentioned him knocking Stephanie up. So funny.
And yay for Matt! Maybe this girl isn't such a psycho... RIGHT???!?!?!!!! Give the poor guy a break! First his girlfriend is murdered (did they ever figure out who did that, or did I miss that somewhere?) and then he dates a crazy. Just let this one work out! At least for a little while.

Haha, I love when Josline and Josh have little fights, they're so entertaining to read :)
Aww, im happy for matt :)

Just wondering...Have you heard Ever After?!? Its so good<3

This update made me laugh. A lot.
I listened to the previews on iTunes. I think By Now might be my favourite. So far. I can't say for sure until I can hear the whole album in its entirety. This two weeks is going to last forever.

This is really weird.....While reading this i was listening to by now and singing the lyrics out loud. then i read that, and got kinda scared cause i thought i was the only one who was dying to hear the recorded version as well...:O

I love how Josh immediately started guessing that males were pregnant after he found out that Josline wasn't. It seems like something that would happen.
It also seemed very fitting that when the kids were sick and crying, he disappeared into the studio. I just feel like that would be something that he would do when he didn't want to deal with screaming children.
That's really cool that Zack is writing songs and planning to try some solo stuff. I hope that it goes well for him.

i swear i read this like 346354675436453 times and i cannot understand it. im so tired, its making me mentally retarded. i just wanted it to be known that i tried to read this, and will come back to it when im awake! oh, also i updated too, in case you didnt know. but yeah, ill return to this when i havent been up for 20 hours straight :/

Ahh no!!! Why does Kodiak have to be deaf?
It's okay though; he'll be fine. I have one cousin that can't speak and another that's deaf and mute. I know a bit of sign language, and let me tell you, those Baby Einstein videos are amazing for learning lol.

Aww, when reading it I was hoping for him not to be totally deaf, but I actually got sad when i found out he wouldnt be able to hear. I feel bad for all deaf people though, because music is just about my life, but I guess if you were born with it, you cant miss something you never experienced..

Either way, good chapter. I really liked the beethoven part, it made me smile. Great chapter, even if it was a little sad, you still made it cute. I just love the parts with the twins grabbing at random parts of peoples bodies, I dont know why, I just find it so adorable! In real life, too...Except for when its my hair they are pulling the shit out of, then its no longer cute..

First of all, there is nothing wrong with dying your hair 'obnoxious colours.' But I'm still 20 so I guess I can get away with it.
Awww poor Matt. Yay for ditching Casey though! I knew right away when she was bitching about people that she said something about Jazz. It made me want to hurt her. That's probably the lowest that someone could possibly get.

You're updating faster than I can keep up. Some of us have homework you know!!!!
But this was cute. I love Zack moments.

Finley is just so cute! :) and the babies, too! English accent are awesome, i went 'aaawwww' when he did that.