This piece is beautifully written. Everything about it gives a sort of olden majestic feel and I honestly love it. However, it took an abrupt turn. First they're all so happy and lovey and then out of hte blue he decides to tell her this news. I would've liked to maybe see some underlying emotions, maybe reflect on that while he watches her play piano? Otherwise, lovely piece. Vey beautiful.
December 19th, 2011 at 11:01pm