The Tower at Sea - Comments

I can't make layouts to save my soul, so I just used mibba default. the style I'm using is a bit difficult, so problems are sort of expected. Thanks for the comment, and worry not I'm continuing this one well into the future.

This was very interesting to read; I like that you use a similar language that people used or would've used back in the 1840s. However, I feel that the layout doesn't match the whole...theme and mood of the story. I would say to get one of the story layout makers to make you one; you can find them on the threads. Also, I found a few grammar and spelling errors along the way, but it was nothing too bad. At times, I felt the story was a bit choppy; you should have a few smoother transitions so it doesn't feel so blocky. A beta could help you with that too; you can find them on the threads as well. Overall, I enjoyed this and I wish you luck with going on with this story :D