Getting Back To Insanity - Comments

update :C

I love the layout, it goes well with the story.
It's really good.
I hope you update soon :)

This story is amazing, and very well written. As soon as I read the description I needed to read more. It makes me think, and I love stories that aren't just a bunch of words stuck together, Like this one. It has depth to it, I guess.... Well I hope my random rambling helped? Hahahah but it's awesome[:

I love stories like this, so automatically I was hooked. I like the concept of the story, and the detail. You definately have alot of research done for this, and your an amazing amazing writer. So dude, i'm ofically hooked. I really hope my comment does this story justicexD
But anyway, I didn't see any grammar or spelling errors, I loved the layout, and can't think of any critique for it really
You did awesome, dude[:

Wow. Just wow. I really like it. It's very rare that you find an original fic on Mibba that is actually original. But this. I would kill to have an imagination like yours! I ended up reading the whole thing. Your standard of writing is very high, I found the later chapters were better than the earlier ones though. I'm not saying that the earlier ones were bad! They were excellent. I just felt like you were more comfortable, like you were coming into yourself more. I think you should definitely continue thus. It's wonderful.

Maaaaaaaaaaaaaan, my dog was biting my toes the whole time I read this, anywho.
I love the title. It's awesome and really...I dunno, drew me in y'know?
Now the prologue, blew me away. Simple as that. Talk about instant love scene ;D

Great work m'dear. Keep it up<33

Wow. This is amazing! I'm totally going to subscribe. I love the plot, it's definitely original. I mean, really, it's probably the most creative one I've ever read on here, and it's refreshing.

I thought you said it had three short chapters, bitch.

Bahaha, I kid. I'm actually happy it was four chapters. This is a way interesting plotline you've got here. It kind of reminds me of Suckerpunch except opposite because the crazy ones are the ones in power. Well...you know what I mean. Anywho. I love this. It's so cool to imagine a world where the crazy ones are finally listened to because it turns out not to be what some of these visionaries wanted. It turns out to be just the same as regular society except that they're in power and you've got to know some of the "crazy" people are regretting the whole "let's get ourselves into power" thing.

Is Mary Firello real? or did you make her up?
And what about the quotations?

I could totes see Dru in this by the way. xD Classic Dru layout. ;p

I really love the premise you've got for this. Don't quit. :D

I loved this. I really did. It's so different from what I usually see on Mibba these days, and that's a good thing. There's a few grammar and spelling errors, but those are definitely accidents that you would pick out if you went back and reread your work. Honestly, great job. You're a great writer. I don't even have anything negative to say about it. Some of the writing is a bit awkward, but that's alright.

I'm going to subscribe to this story, and I won't forget it!

First off, your layout is gorgeous, totally mesmerizing! Your prologue, amazing. This quote: “We all must jump...because someday, maybe there will be someone catching us. And how will we know of their existence, if we never jump?" Fantastic, I'm about to make it my facebook status no joke lol. I love that quote, it really sets the tone of your story.
I like your vocabulary and how you talk about certain concepts, like schizophrenia and megalomania. Based on your first chapter after the prologue, it sounds like a sci-fi type of story, it's something I'd probably pick up in Barnes&Nobles to read honestly. I'd really like to see what you do with this story, subscribing :D

I like the whole concept of this story.
i've never read anything like it, and that's a good thing :3
It's not a typical story about insanity.
It's quite good, it's a nice start <3

This is a really deep story! :D I love it already, oh and yay! My first comment on a story. XD But I hope to read more soon, Ann!

I've read all three chapters. It was an easy read and I couldn't help but not got to the next chapter. Psychotic isn't even the word to describe your characters. This piece is different, I would have to agree, and it’s not the "typical" insanity story dealing with this type of mental disorder. You have some ways to go, but I like the start. I have a story dealing with a schizo as a character, but mine is a little different.

This is an excellent story! I'm totally engaged and I find myself questioning the idea of sanity itself. I like how your character addresses readers about this issue and underlies questions that really keep us thinking. Your layout I might add is beautiful, keep updating I would love to know more.

Since I've only read the prologue, I can't give you a solid interpretation of what you're about to write about in chapters 1 & 2 . But I can tell you that I love that in a story. It really drew me in, the quote, and how you are telling the readers that this story "isn't what it seems". Its almost like you are creating an alternate universe entirely, yet reminding us that it is the future, rather than a different world. You used just the right words in the prologue, that I'm pleased to inform you that this is a story I will definitely be subbing to. Brilliant idea, honey. I can't wait to read more of this !

I've commented on this before! I've subscribed. I've changed email addresses, so thats probably a reason....
Anyway,
Nobody knows exactly what Mary Firello saw that day...what transformed her from a mild paranoid schizophrenic to a megalomaniac. Somehow, the 'Schizo's message of self empowerment, of reaching your goals despite your mental illness, reached her as a plan for world domination. When the 'Schizos referred to the mental health patients as simply 'differently minded' ( Ever since the physically disabled were officially relabeled as 'differently able', the 'Schizos had been pushing for mental health patients to become known as 'differently minded.'), Mary heard differently better.

You, my dear, have incredible talent. I am envious to your style of writing. I also adore the layout. It's amazing. I hope to see more very soon. Please please please!

I love it :) Im definitely subscribing and I cant wait to read more ;) its absolutely captivating and I've only read 2 chapters <3 Keep writing!

I like the plot of this, but the quotes in the middle of the story throws me off - Maybe it would work better without the name of the person saying it, and just have it in italics.
I like your narration style, you carry off this story well.
I like the mystery in this piece.
Well done.

I love Dystopian stories. So you had me right there, lol.

This line: Now I'm the one you want to put in a straitjacket, right? Think again; better people then you have tried. Is awesome.

The first chapter is a little... lacking, but I think that's because it's more of a second prologue than a real first chapter. So maybe use one of those as a summary and the other as a prologue and then make sure your first chapter really pops.

Just some suggestions.

-Grace

More, more, more. I want more, hun. xD Really interesting idea. It's one of those ideas that when you read it's like, 'holy $#!*! How did they think that up?!" Awesomely written. I'm so subbing you.