Hi i am here for comment swap :) I just started the story and I can tell you that I really enjoy it so far. I will for sure continue to read it. I really like your style of writing. Since I am new to writing I really hope to grow like you to make my stories seem more realistic. I do have to admit that it was a bit gruesome but I still loved it. I really like how Kendall is trying to convince herself that she is normal by saying that she is normal and there is nothing wrong with her. Even though she is having nightmares about killing people. I like how I feel like i am going through everything she is going through. As if I was in her head just watching along, you caught my attention in the first chapter and made me want to read more. I hope I grow and learn to write like you. Thank you for sharing this story :)
October 31st, 2015 at 04:13am