Whispered Secrets Behind the Interstate Gas Station. - Comments

Hi, I’m heree from comment swap, but that being saidd, When I went into this story,I knew nothing about it,but when I saw it was Ryan and Brendon,I was excited,as I can never find any good Panic! At The Disco fan fictions here, so I really liked yours. :) That being said, and onto the actual story,I really liked it. It flowed really easily,and there were no grammar mistakes,or punctiation,or anything else like that. As other people said,I really like the qoute at the beginning,and the picture and back round. It was quick and to the point,and i really liked it. You didn’t spend four chapters going over one thing, and made everything to the point. Even if you went into the story not being a fan of Panic! At The Disco, you made it easy to enjoy and something anyone could read with ease no matter what I liked your title too, even though that’s not really relevant. That being said, even though it was a one-shot, I thought it was really good and would definetly read whatever else you put out. You're a very good writer, and I cant wait to see what else you have later on. 

I think it is a very interesting story, you should make another chapter. I see in the comments its be a bout over a year since the last comment? Why havent you updated? Your a very good writer.
It was really short, got to the point. It kind of showed that in the title, there was no bullshit there, it just said exactly what the story was about, no flowers, no nothing, which was really good because that was pretty much the feel of the whole thing. So when you get a chance update. Its something different that I have read and I usually stick to certain type of stories. Oh and I do very much like the banner =)

I think it is a very interesting story, you should make another chapter. I see in the comments its be a bout over a year since the last comment? Why havent you updated? Your a very good writer.

I really liked this. I loved the quote in the summary and I didn't realise it had come from that Panic video that I just watched.

It was really short, got to the point. It kind of showed that in the title, there was no bullshit there, it just said exactly what the story was about, no flowers, no nothing, which was really good because that was pretty much the feel of the whole thing. It was just raw.

I love this. Everything was written so beautifully and the descriptions were flawless. I love how you're able to pack in so much emotion, even in your shorter pieces. Wonderful job.

This is absolutely amazing.
No other words could describe it. The words are great and you can make it
sound pretty, if that makes any sense... It was easy to get caught up in the story.

I actually watched 'The Overture' video after you linked it in your jorunal. It reminded me a little of Wonderland, mainly because the guys in the striped clothes reminded me of Tweedledum and Tweedledee.

Anyway. Your story. The banner is, as usual, wonderful, as is the dialoug between Brendon and Ryan. I espessially like how Ryan seems a little broken here. (I think broken is the right word. At the very least, he's confused.)

He didn't know if the last part of the sentence was true anymore, but he'd say it was until he heard differently.
I really, really love this line. It's like, Brendon's become unsure about their feelings for each other, since things have become different, but he'll keep saying it until they start believing it, or until it becomes true again. Or even until he's ready to admit that the feelings aren't the same anymore.

I'm loving the influx of stories, by the way. I check your page pretty much every day, so it's great to click onto your story bit and see a load of new stories.

this isn't going to make any sense if you haven't watched 'the overture' video yet.

xoxox
-dru