good thing he spends time at the cemetaru like ive said kylie is a bitch
February 6th, 2008 at 10:22pm
AWWww a Skyler fan!
- FrancyPansy:
- with evey chapter i love it more... but i do NOT like kylie. maybe cuz she replaced skyler! HAHA no one can replace her...
great! keep updating
She's jealous that's all
- alternachick08:
- she doesnt have to be so bitchy to sky
aw well if she divorce him, I can always start writing ferards :lol:
- Umbrella Pwnage:
- Okay, I'm calming down a little bit from the bitchiness of the first chapter...
I do happen to think Kylie is somewhat of an idiot though.
She doesn't need to be Gerard's babysitter.
And if she isn't happy there is a little thing called divorce....
Then again that would probably screw him up even more....
Oh well she could have kept her job.
Great update.
My profile= I can't sponsor their honeymoon anymore. lol.
- Dr. Acula:
- Hello there- my profile says to tell you to tell your profile that my profile loves your profile very much.
Yeah, I love this story very much- it's got some real emotion in these letters. More in the first than the second, more anger. I liked the first letter. The second...I like the way she describes the papers but it's almost a normal letter to a friend.
Still, I love this and I can't wait for the next chapters!
Thank you for the helpful review! I enjoyed it tremendously.
- Elle:
- You confused my wife with your chapter titles. We write our dates in a different format. Month-day-year. Perhaps you should spell the months out. Perhaps not.
This was somewhat disappointing to me to read. The first letter held a lot of emotion. This one fell flat almost. It was more of a story telling type deal.The first letter was written in anger. What was the reasoning behind the second one? Resembled a pen-pal type communication to me. I could fully support her writing to release her feelings.Sending letters to an unknown address can be theraputic, but to go from anger to almost an offer of friendship, just does not sit well with me. Unless of course the woman is mentally unstable and to be married to Mr. Way like that she must be,
I can see why you might think that...
- Converse Addict:
- I hate kylie shes a total bitch
yeah Gerard and a police officer, kinky! lol
- MJLS:
nice to know she was a police officer, good chapter, I really enjoy reading what you write
keep up the good work and update as soon as you can
Oh wow! I so know how to pick a title! Hate letters and hate comments! lol.
- Umbrella Pwnage:
- Oh dear God!
You have just given me so much to rant about!
Rant designed for Billy: What the fuck?!?! Why did he need to do that?
Asshole!
I did so call that he was a jerk though! Seriously if you look through the comments the first time Billy came in I bet you will find one that says I thought he wasn't cool.
As for Kylie: What a god damned bitch!
Complaining about how she's Skyler's 'stand in'!
If she really felt that way why did she marry him?
She didn't need to! It wasn't a shotgun wedding!
And that last paragraph was just evil!
How could she be so malicious! Basically saying she was happy Skyler was dead!
Humph..... bitch.
Apparently you're not the only one, I'll try to clear that up in future chapters.
- bite me umite likeit:
- i am soo confused why the hell did you kill skyler???? and why was billie her killer??? so bloody confusing!!!!
Aw thank you so much for the kind words!
- Dr. Acula:
- Aw, this is great and I can't wait for more!