Life on the Moon - Comments

  • fuckyoubarakat

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    Dear god. This is brutal! Why did you have to end it before he could react! hahaha
    Update again soon, I fucking love this story.
    June 10th, 2011 at 11:33pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    It's about time.
    Hopefully Zack is happy about the baby!
    June 10th, 2011 at 11:29pm
  • Cellophane Soldier

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    fucking finally!!!! Thank goodness for Jimmy and Leana!

    update soon please! i really wanna see Zacky's reaction.
    June 10th, 2011 at 11:08pm
  • misery_writer925

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    Anhui finally!!!
    June 10th, 2011 at 10:44pm
  • Galaxia;

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    HELL YES!!! BOOYAH BABEH!!

    If Zacky leaves, I'm going to insert myself into the story and beat the shit out of him. Just so you know (:
    June 10th, 2011 at 10:35pm
  • cattfeine

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    .......YES!
    June 10th, 2011 at 10:04pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    All this back and forth, cutting each other off.
    Someone better freaking tell Zacky that she's pregnant 'cause it's getting pretty old.
    Communication is seriously lacking...and they wonder why their lives are a mess?!
    June 9th, 2011 at 02:17am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Poor Whit!
    Jimmy almost spilled the beans...
    I hope she talks to Zacky!
    June 7th, 2011 at 03:49am
  • alejandro;;

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    I hope she'll tell him in the next chapter.
    I don't know how much longer i can wait.
    Please update soon <3
    June 6th, 2011 at 03:32pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    Is the next chapter going to be when she tells him
    God i fucking hope so . . .
    this was a great update, I just hope that if Whitney actually tells him they will be able to fix everything
    <3 Michele
    June 6th, 2011 at 03:29pm
  • Cellophane Soldier

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    please tell me he finds out soon!! grrrrr

    update soon please!!!
    June 6th, 2011 at 05:36am
  • yellowjellybean14

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    ok it is seriously pissing me off that she can not say 3 word i am pregnant. i know it is something that should be special and it is very significant but with all of the dang drama why can she not say 3 little words!!! she just needs to confess that she is pregnant.
    June 6th, 2011 at 05:13am
  • atrocious

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    STUPID STUPID ZACKY CUTTING HER OFF. I wanna slap him!
    June 6th, 2011 at 04:19am
  • GraBerry

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    I just found this story today, and it's really a great one. It shows the other side of pregnancy, the side where circumstance and hormones combined are a dangerous cocktail. I can understand why Whitney is scared to tell Zack, but she should trust him enough to be able to be understanding in the situation. I do think that both characters have faults, and that's what makes me want to read more. I subscribed and I' going to read some more of your stories too. I can't wait for the next update.

    There's only one thing I found annoying in the story, it's truly minor and didn't take away from the story at all, there are some slight inconsistencies. Like how in the first major fight that the reader sees Zack says he's going to stay in the guest room, yet the next day he's at Brians. I hope you don't take me pointing this out as being rude, it's most definitely not meant that way.
    May 31st, 2011 at 07:00pm
  • atrocious

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    Awww poor Whitney, I feel so damn sorry for her, even if she did bring some of this on herself. There is never going to be a perfect time, especially in their strained relationship. She just needs to grow some balls and tell him what's going on. He's not going to react like she thinks. He'll be thrilled about the baby!
    May 31st, 2011 at 01:02am
  • Cellophane Soldier

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    she needs to grow a pair and just tell him. thats all i have to say

    update soon please
    May 31st, 2011 at 12:44am
  • Dreamer1226

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    OH MY GOD, WHITNEY. JUST TELL ZACKY ALREADYYYYYYYYYYYYY. -______-

    ..just wanted to speak my mind as if the characters were here with me ahahahah. :)

    update soon please? <3
    May 31st, 2011 at 12:02am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Here's an idea, how about she goes over to Brian's house and talks to Zacky there! She needs to be straightforward with him and if he tries to interrupt her, she needs to tell him to shut up and listen. She's making her life wayyy more stressful then it needs to be!
    May 30th, 2011 at 10:49pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    It pains me each time she doesn't tell him that she's pregnant :(
    But i can understand that she wants to tell him in person rather than over the phone
    <3 Michele
    May 30th, 2011 at 10:31pm
  • cattfeine

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    I love Whit's character but , gah! I really wish she would just blurt out the fact shes pregnant. You know say it out loud a few times then work up the nerve to and follow through with telling Zee.
    May 30th, 2011 at 09:25pm