All this back and forth, cutting each other off. Someone better freaking tell Zacky that she's pregnant 'cause it's getting pretty old. Communication is seriously lacking...and they wonder why their lives are a mess?!
Is the next chapter going to be when she tells him God i fucking hope so . . . this was a great update, I just hope that if Whitney actually tells him they will be able to fix everything <3 Michele
ok it is seriously pissing me off that she can not say 3 word i am pregnant. i know it is something that should be special and it is very significant but with all of the dang drama why can she not say 3 little words!!! she just needs to confess that she is pregnant.
I just found this story today, and it's really a great one. It shows the other side of pregnancy, the side where circumstance and hormones combined are a dangerous cocktail. I can understand why Whitney is scared to tell Zack, but she should trust him enough to be able to be understanding in the situation. I do think that both characters have faults, and that's what makes me want to read more. I subscribed and I' going to read some more of your stories too. I can't wait for the next update.
There's only one thing I found annoying in the story, it's truly minor and didn't take away from the story at all, there are some slight inconsistencies. Like how in the first major fight that the reader sees Zack says he's going to stay in the guest room, yet the next day he's at Brians. I hope you don't take me pointing this out as being rude, it's most definitely not meant that way.
Awww poor Whitney, I feel so damn sorry for her, even if she did bring some of this on herself. There is never going to be a perfect time, especially in their strained relationship. She just needs to grow some balls and tell him what's going on. He's not going to react like she thinks. He'll be thrilled about the baby!
Here's an idea, how about she goes over to Brian's house and talks to Zacky there! She needs to be straightforward with him and if he tries to interrupt her, she needs to tell him to shut up and listen. She's making her life wayyy more stressful then it needs to be!
It pains me each time she doesn't tell him that she's pregnant :( But i can understand that she wants to tell him in person rather than over the phone <3 Michele
I love Whit's character but , gah! I really wish she would just blurt out the fact shes pregnant. You know say it out loud a few times then work up the nerve to and follow through with telling Zee.
Update again soon, I fucking love this story.