May 13th, 2013 at 03:49am
When the Sun Goes Down - Comments
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So I'm like really behind in finding this story, but I just had to comment on it. I really, really enjoied this tale. I love how you paced the relationship between Murphy and Adrienne throughout the entire story. It really gets old when the relationship happens in the second chapter without really developing anything as in friendship first. The anticipation was great. Thanks for writing!May 12th, 2013 at 05:43pm
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Awwww.
And YAY!
I love Paul.August 18th, 2011 at 08:34am -
pg rated kiss... XD
and SMECKER! OMG!!!! :DAugust 18th, 2011 at 04:29am -
STOP KILLING EVERYONE!!!!!!! i'm in tears right nowww.... GAH! ):August 18th, 2011 at 04:19am
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Why do you insist on making me cry?
First Romeo, now Noah.....August 17th, 2011 at 06:10am -
I can't wait for more.August 15th, 2011 at 09:59pm
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Ack! Love the marsh-ee-mellows(:
wasnt expectin the tickle fight though XDAugust 14th, 2011 at 04:13am -
If it had been me, I'd wait till the twins were asleep.
Then I'd beat the shit out of Sean.
They can't stop me if they're sleeping.August 13th, 2011 at 01:17pm -
if it had been me after Sean... story would be over. The twins would have to shoot me down, and then I STILL might a' keeped comin >.> <.<August 13th, 2011 at 08:19am
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i feel loved now lol(:August 13th, 2011 at 07:51am
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brilliant work, as always(:
and AAAW you mentioned me! :DAugust 13th, 2011 at 07:51am -
Oh no!
I'm anticipating the next chapter even more.
I certainly didn't expect Sean to be the next to die.
Granted, he hasn't yet, but that's not the point.....August 6th, 2011 at 01:48pm -
I'm so anxious to find out what's going to happen next.August 4th, 2011 at 06:11am
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Suspicious.
I love it!July 20th, 2011 at 06:10am -
It's like each chapter leaves me more anxious.
I can't wait to read more.July 19th, 2011 at 08:47pm -
GASP!
I'm so anxious to find out what's going to happen.July 15th, 2011 at 08:43am -
Oh my gosh!
I'm soooo anxious for the next chapter.
(For some reason I didn't know you
Had already updated)July 15th, 2011 at 12:20am -
ack! i finished what you have!! must.. type.. FASTER!!! im dying to see how this ends!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDJuly 14th, 2011 at 07:01am
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OMF-inG!! (G for goshh)) I F-in love your story. Its fucking fantastic!!
Please update soon and I'll Be forever grateful...
Thnx hunn.July 13th, 2011 at 11:35pm
Thankyou so much for the story comment! :)
Yeah, I know what you mean about their little relationship. Looking back at it now, I would have liked to prolong them getting together. I've debated re-writing it. I might, because the sequal was a little iffy. It's still rarely active haha. But I'm happy you liked it. Thankyou again for the comment! :D