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    This is good! I love how you tied it into the text and the banner well. Your layout was very cute--especially the pictures along the side, nice touch.

    It's amazing actually, even though it's kinda rough in places, a little faced pace and slightly confusing how she just JUMPS to ryan suddenly.

    But you know if you continued this into a story i'd read it.
    March 19th, 2011 at 04:57pm
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