Pffft, no one ever said I was good at story comments anyway, this will just be a testament to this. :P -mwahaha, I love chapter 4, the Jack POV. It's all like: "fucking biiitches, fuckin motherfuckers. Get the fuuuuck out of my way." <3 -lfamo. I don't know if I love or hate that blonde. :P -oh, Mai Ling? And um Red, at one point it says there's two beds in the room, at another it says. One. might want to fix that. :)
Great job, all y'all people! I shall keep reading now, love this! :)
I like Raea, Evan, and Holly :D If any one of them go, I'll, like, cry as phoenix says XD But everyone is seriously amazing writers and looking forward to an update
I really like this story so far. Everyone is such a good writer, and I've read a few stories like this before, and they've all sucked. Haha. Thank you guys for actually writing a good one. XD My favorites are Evan and Jersey. And I'm looking forward to read about Raea. :D