Your Flannel Shirt - Comments

  • Sucks For You

    Sucks For You (100)

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    This is brilliant!
    "Your scent clings to the collar, and sometimes I’ll wake up in the middle of the night and catch a whiff of you, that combination of Axe, sweat, and weed. And other times, I’ll catch a glimmer of golden blonde underneath the streetlight’s glow, a forgotten strand dangling from the sleeve, and I’ll long to run my fingers through your hair, to feel your breath against my neck slow and steady."
    ^ That was my absolute favorite part. It's simple, yet to me it seemed like it holds so much emotion.
    One thing I love about your writing is that while I'm reading, the way you word things and the feeling you put into it reminds me of things from my past, kind of like memories that I haven't though about in years, and it's extremely heartwarming.
    I also love the fact that your spelling/grammar errors are non existant.
    You truely are a brilliant writer. :)
    April 19th, 2011 at 01:46am
  • jcov

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    This is the most adorable thing ever! Thinking about it, i imagine wearing my BFF's shirt when I'm away and that reminds me of her. And of course, I don't take a Whiff of the shirt and go into detail but this is beautifully written and I like the golden colored hair reference. And it's so cute when you have a feeling that you can't wear something belonging to someone out because you're afraid you'll ruin it with your own scent instead. That feeling is precious and reading about it makes me smile
    March 21st, 2011 at 02:40am