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  • a venom

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    loved it
    March 30th, 2011 at 05:56am
  • AnnieArchie

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    Intriguing start, looking forward to more!
    <3
    March 30th, 2011 at 05:25am
  • cruciatus.

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    have I told you how much I dislike Carson? I think I have, but I'm going to say it again, I really don't like the man. There's something fishy about him that I don't trust. He's just....egh. lmfao I really can't stand the man. tehe Zacky on the other hand...Happy face I can't begin to say how much I love the character you've portrayed him to be. I hope he clocks Carson at one point. If it came down to it, Zacky would totally pwn him. And I'd stand there giggling like some psychotic woman. lmfao He's just...yeah. Zacky's hot, and Carson's a jerk. I can somehow see him turning out to be some kind of closet furry or something, which actually makes him less of a jerk and more of a creep. XD That's probably just a product of my overimaginative imagination. XD I can't wait until the next chapter!
    March 30th, 2011 at 05:22am
  • Fictional.Reality

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    Ask yourself this, Who could resist Zacky?
    haha I know i wouldn't be able to
    <3 Michele
    March 30th, 2011 at 03:45am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Hope Zacky doesn't get caught!
    Please update soon!!
    March 30th, 2011 at 03:42am
  • TwistedScars

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    *sighs* cell phones ruin everything, they always interrupt.
    Amazing!! update soon!!
    Hopefully he goes back later!!
    March 30th, 2011 at 03:21am
  • nyeh

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    Kissing Zacky was so much different than kissing Carson. Both of the kisses were nice, but Zacky's had such an edge to them, and I never knew what was coming neck.

    Neck? Do you mean next?
    March 30th, 2011 at 03:20am
  • burning.

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    ahhhh, dang Gena for ruining Zacky's plans :P love it! <3 :)
    March 30th, 2011 at 03:17am
  • BeauteousBeth

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    This seems really good so far. I love the detail! Carson does seem like he has issues but until I see a rude side to him, I'm feeling neutral. Hope to see more (:
    March 30th, 2011 at 02:55am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    O.o
    I'm gonna love this story!!
    More soon please!!
    March 30th, 2011 at 02:02am
  • Issues

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    This story seems really interesting. I'm exited to read what happens next. Please update soon.
    March 28th, 2011 at 12:56pm
  • DisneylandAcidTrip;

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    I seriously love love love your writing! You have THE best stories! :)
    Please continue on this one :)
    March 28th, 2011 at 05:09am
  • autumnfreakshow

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    This sounds like an interesting concept. I really like the twist that the first update had and how many obsticales there are for Carson already.

    Great update<3
    I can't wait to see where this story goes :D
    March 28th, 2011 at 04:53am
  • ForeverPlagued

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    Loved it so far! This one is going to be really...interesting. I don't like Carson ONE bit! More soon, please?
    March 28th, 2011 at 03:54am
  • kaylelle

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    Love it <3
    *subscribes*
    March 28th, 2011 at 03:51am
  • burning bright.

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    I am so subscribing to this one.
    The first chapter was insane! I love it so much already!
    March 28th, 2011 at 03:37am
  • a venom

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    can't wait for more of this one
    March 28th, 2011 at 02:50am
  • TwistedScars

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    *subscribed* I already love the beginning, I foresee a lot of drama in the future of this story!! yay!! amazing!! update soon!!
    March 28th, 2011 at 12:55am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Loved the start! <3
    March 27th, 2011 at 10:57pm
  • Aly!

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    "Oh what a tangled web we weave, when we first practice to decieve."

    I love this (: can't wait for more!
    March 27th, 2011 at 09:33pm