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  • Nia_Flores

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    @ Lost In The Darkness
    Hello. It's been so long since I've logged into this site, that I completely forgot about all this stories. I'm so glad you liked it. I'm thinking about finishing this, just gotta find my groove. Got the time since this pandemic started. I've gotta read the prequel and this first to see the path it was taking since it's been so long since I've written something like this. Stay safe and stay tuned. Wink
    July 2nd, 2020 at 05:18am
  • Lost In The Darkness

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    I’ve never wanted a story finished more than I do this one!
    March 24th, 2020 at 06:24pm
  • Breepocket

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    I've never been so mad a story want finished
    February 16th, 2018 at 02:39pm
  • SimmisterGates

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    oh god, you need to update, our song and this are the best fan fictions I've ever read! you are really talanted, pls update soon<3
    November 10th, 2014 at 09:22pm
  • xXnillyXx

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    @ Nia_Flores
    I hope to see an update soon Mr. Green Of course we remember how can we forget this story! Wink
    June 19th, 2014 at 02:42am
  • genyrock

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    Yeah me too a just re read this story! Hope you gonna update soon!
    May 20th, 2014 at 11:47pm
  • Nia_Flores

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    @ HanerJoy
    Wow... I didn't thought people remembered this story. I haven't forgotten about it, I'm just trying to figure out where I want this story to go. But I think I'll be updating soon.
    May 13th, 2014 at 09:02pm
  • HanerJoy

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    I just re read this story again. I hope you haven't forgot it :) update when you can :)
    May 10th, 2014 at 06:51am
  • xXnillyXx

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    @ Nia_Flores
    Yeah i'm glad to read that i miss this story :)
    June 9th, 2013 at 10:32pm
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    @ AirGirl14
    I'm working on it. This story has been on hiatus way too long due to personal problems, but I'm reading it to get inspiration. Update soon, I promise!
    June 2nd, 2013 at 07:59am
  • AirGirl14

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    Please update soon!
    June 1st, 2013 at 08:56pm
  • Nia_Flores

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    @ HanerJoy

    Aww thank you very much. I haven't updated in a while, but I have been writing & I have up to 3 chps already. So expect an update soon!!!
    April 9th, 2013 at 08:14am
  • HanerJoy

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    I looove this story just like the prequel :D I can't wait for more :D
    April 8th, 2013 at 06:44pm
  • x_Synyster_x

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    cant wait for a new update! amazing story!
    January 10th, 2013 at 01:02am
  • Nia_Flores

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    @ Fiction7X

    The last couple of chapters I've posted haven't been spell checked since I posted it in such a hurry & from work so I didn't have the time to do it, so I know it has all types of errors & I'm sorry for that. I'm working on it.

    About the puntuaction marks, I think you're referring to my constant use of '&', '...' and '?!?!?'. That's just the way I've been writing for a long time, my teachers told me the same. Since English is my second language, I have a bit of a hard time with this, but I'm working on it too. The same goes with the 'cuz'. People have mentioned that to me too. I'll be editing the story in the next days.

    But thanks for all the suggestions. I appreciate it. And don't be a silent reader. I love to read that people really love the story. Wink
    November 15th, 2012 at 08:09am
  • MoMo_92

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    Oh my god I don't kno what to say right now like I feel bad for Brian, I want to slap the taste out of Zacky for realizing tht he did ruin Brian's life, and to slap Matt for tellin Val in the first place, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    November 14th, 2012 at 08:58pm
  • Fiction7X

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    I seriously love this story even though I never comment. I'm more of a lurker. I felt the need to comment to ask you to get a beta or use a spell check. The excessive use of punctuation, the lack of capital letters, using punctuation where there should be words and and using words such as "coz" instead of because makes it very difficult to read. I don't want you to think I'm being a bitch or anything because I seriously love this story. I just find it difficult to read.
    November 14th, 2012 at 09:08am
  • candice

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    Noooooooo!!!!! He needs to get his Bellie back.....
    November 14th, 2012 at 05:36am
  • xXnillyXx

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    Awww i feel so sad for both of them but a bit more for Brian poor him! He's really unhappy and i think he should listen to his father to be selfish sometimes, it won't be healthy for the kid to live in a house where their parents don't love each other! And Gina, i love her so much she's right they all been so shitty friends to Brian! And in my opinion Jimmy and Matt was the worst especially Jimmy! I think the only one who was a bit for him was Johnny when they go to drink a beer together few chapter ago i was happy to see at least one was there for him! But a bulb just bright in Zacky's head awww! And now i'm really lost for where this story will end but it's a great because we can expect nothing! Suspence until the next update ahah
    November 14th, 2012 at 05:18am
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    I honestly CANNOT see where this story is going to end up.
    November 14th, 2012 at 04:37am