From the summary, I was a little bit skeptical about reading this but after reading the first chapter, I found it amusing and something that I could find myself continuing to read.
I'm not going to lie, there were a couple of grammatical and punctional errors but other than that, I like it as its an original idea and focuses on one of the biggest bands in the world so, well done and keep it up!
I didn't really find anything wrong with this story. I like your story line and you use great detail, which I love. Um, I spotted a few grammatical errors, but nothing too terrible. Keep it up, buttercup! :)
It was a great chapter!!!(: I loved the ending! ^_^ it's so cute! :DI hope Billie Joe keeps his promise and doesn't fuck up again!... cause the kids and Mike and Tre' are hot in their trails! :3
How dare Billie kick Adrienne out of the house >:O what a jerk!! >.< Well it was an awesome update!! I hope he finds her soon! :D I can't wait for more!! :)
Ooo now Ollie knows!! And Joey is suspicious!! Awesome chapter! :D it's great that Billie Joe now knows how it's like to be Adrienne and for Adrienne to know how it's like to be Billie Joe! :D