Before I Leave - Comments

  • I love the story so far but I am a little bit confused. What's the main characters name? Is the story description going to happen in the story or did it already happen? Where is her mom and dad? How is the description for this story relevant to what is happening in the story so far? Besides those questions, I hope you keep on writing and you update soon :)
    June 25th, 2011 at 11:14am
  • I actually like this story =] The only problem I saw was that you changed the names around a bit, like in one chapter, you said Anna instead of Emma and in another chapter, you called Corey Jake. Other than that, I liked it and I'm sorry that more people haven't commented!
    June 17th, 2011 at 05:48am