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This is so brilliantly descriptive and emotional.
Especially for a zombie story!
This passage sets a perfect scene:
"She sat in the center of the room, next to a chair that had been bolted to the floor. She wouldn't sit, she wouldn't eat, and she wouldn't move. Granted, there was a chain going from the metal band around her throat to the middle of the chair, but that only hindered how far she could move from the center of the room."
The idea of having her own son be the victim that she ends up taking is so poetically sad.
I actually gasped when that happened.
I love your writing style, truly =)
June 17th, 2011 at 06:41am
I must say, your way with words is amazing. For being so short, I actually felt like I was there and could see and hear EVERYTHING :) Sometimes I will read one that is short and not get everything and it kind of annoys me, but not this one. You got it perfectly. It shocked me with what she did kind of sort of, but then again she was a zmobie. Great drabble. I loved it. Amazing work :)
March 30th, 2011 at 03:59am
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