Blue Suicide - Comments

  • blonde

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    this is absolutely beautiful. pleaseee turn this into a full story. or even just a three shot.
    March 7th, 2013 at 03:07am
  • blades

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    this is beautiful. the way you ended it is fantastic.
    March 7th, 2013 at 01:06am
  • Hey Jude

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    holy canoly this is beautiful. Do you want to write, like, for a living? Like major in english and stuff? Because you're ridiculously good at it.
    July 30th, 2011 at 07:45pm
  • tigermilk

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    I am so excited to see this I'm bouncing on my bed like a little kid but I feel like I should be acting more solemn because it's so beautiful and serious and I'll do a proper comment tomorrow but it's so lovely (heh) and I'm really excited to see the conclusion!
    May 9th, 2011 at 11:01pm
  • animal soup

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    So far, this is massively beautiful,
    wonderfully articulate and punctuated with emotion
    so deep and withering it almost makes me want to cry.
    Especially when you wrote "not hearing the endearment love is slowly decomposing my bones"
    oh my you are just so wonderful.
    I can't wait to read the next installment of this. :)
    May 5th, 2011 at 04:31am