Sold My Soul - Comments

Again, I miss this. Lots. Also, I hope Italy's fucking amazing. If you're even still there. Anyway, I do hope that Italy is treating you well, and that it's giving you tons and tons of inspiration. n_n

Okay I took the time to read the entire 12 chapters.I must say I thoroughly enjoyed this story!!It was just what I needed tonight.I am quite anxious to read more and the quote was from Lord of the Rings was it not?

I.Love. This. I miss it, too ;~;

my oh my! I love the story! I read everything in a few hours.. it was amazing. keep it up! cant wait for the next chapter! :)
EllieVenegance (also... :D)

Sigh.

I've finished reading all the chapters now, and I'm eagerly awaiting the rest like a sad pup. LOL.

Chapter ten was flipping sexy. I loved the amount of description you put into it. Have I ever told you how much I love your writing style? You balance emotions, descriptions and dialogue so perfectly. I swear there are only a few writers on here who can successfully pull that off, and you're definitely one of them.

I'm sorry I took so long to come back to this, I really and truly am. But honestly, after reading through chapters five to nine, I finally remembered why I actually subscribed. This story really is that addictive (:

Perfection, honestly.

I just read all the chapter... amazing :D

I fell in a river today.

Hmm...for the end quote, I want to say it's from the band Cage the Elephants who have a song named that. My best friend's boyfriend LOVES CtE and thought it would be awesome to make me listen to a few of their songs lmao. But you said 'character' so the only other person I can think of is Elphaba from Wicked who sings a song named "No Rest for the Wicked"...well, she doesn't, actually. It's called "No One Mourns the Wicked" and it's sung by Glinda and the citizens of Munchkinland and/or Oz. Never seen the play, just heard the soundtrack, haha.

Wow, looks like Brian and Ashley have some shit on their hands. :o I'm seriously terrified to see who is at the door. Sob. Sob as in cry, not the abbreviation lol. Let's just hope that Brian is prepared to handle it. I don't have much worry about it, though. I think he can handle it. :]

You know what?

The amount of description, dialogue and character development you have going on here is fucking addictive. I love this story. I love Ash's character and even though I've only just managed to read the first four chapters, I'm definitely subscribing and coming back for more.

Wow. This story has been so interesting I haven't been able to "put it down" for lack of better terminology. Your writing is just about flawless and you kept me interested the entire time. You know how to write a suspense story, girl. ;] I was biting my nails...er, metaphorically...the whole time even though I knew Brian was immortal, hehe. You got me right off the bat and I am totally hooked and subbing which is something I never ever do, since I get frustrated with the emails lol. But this story is worth it.

By the way you don't need to worry about letting me know it's an AU. I read anything given to me unless it's poorly written or I can't get into it. :D

First off, your summary is something akin to the back cover of a book. :3
I enjoyed it quiet thoroughly. It presented your point and the cotents of the story, and almost had a humorous side to it, toward the end.

I always find it interesting when people take real life aspects and insert band members/other celebrity subjects of a fanfic into it.
Gives it quite a bit of interest.

This bald man. He's freaking me out quite a bit.
"Bad career choices", eh?
Ooooh now I'm extremely curious! Call me morbid, but I'm dying to find out!
And CLIFFHANGER!
An amazing way to end the first chapter.
I applaud you greatly!
I'll have to come back and read/review all the other chapters as well!
*subscribes*

I'm really liking this so far. (I've only read the first few chapters.)
It's very well written, in my opinion. And, just easy to read and follow along with.
I like the balance between the stuff like description and dialogue. I like how there are a lot parts with people talking, but it's not too much.
They have a little apartment that they can't afford and Brian is getting stabbed/mugged or something.
I will totally read more of this. I want to know more of what is going on with these characters.

HOW DOES THIS STORY NOT HAVE MORE COMMENTS.

I rarely read A7X fics, only because they all seem the same to me and it gets a little tedious (usually the band is super famous and having crazy sex with groupies left and right, or finding out they have a long-lost daughter or something), but this is amazingly fresh and original. I'm a sucker for supernatural stories and demonic deals going wrong, so you've already hit an interest there, haha. I'm really glad you kind of dove right into the action in the very first chapter, instead of drawing it out and trying to force it to be dramatic. It's already dramatic enough the way you wrote it xD It was nuts.

& I love what you've done, making Ash his anchor. It's romantic, in a dark and scary kind of way, but it totally works with the theme of the story and everything. It also gives the story a really good plot point, because now Ash is really valuable to both Brian and the people chasing after them.

There were no mistakes as far as I could tell, and the only suggestion I have is maybe to fix the color of the text and the background, as it's kind of difficult to read with all the purple. Other than that, though, excellent job! I read up to chapter 6 but I'm gonna subscribe so I remember to come back and read more :D

Why does this only have fourteen comments? This is fantastic. Usually I don't read fan fiction that I don't follow, but this so far hasn't gotten me confused at all.

Title: I love the title it reminds me of a story of mine that is a work in progress. But I like the idea of someone selling their soul, it always makes for an interesting story.
Layout: The layout is fantastic, it sets the tone but yet it is simple!
Summary: The little piece you did as a summary completely pulled me in. When I heard it was an A7x fan fic I wasn't that excited to check it out but that summary got me hooked. I thought it was well written and it was very too the point.
Chapter One: Wow. That was crazy intense and I'm going to continue on so I know if he dies or not! I think my favorite part was when you kept counting her mistakes. It kept things in perspective and it showed how dire the situation was. I thought that the chapter flowed nicely and there wasn't any major grammar mistakes as far as I could tell. I just had a few things to point out. One is I thought that it dived in a little, but it was a good thing since it kept me guessing a little the whole way. The other is I would've liked to see a lot more emotion when the guys came to her door. But I still liked how you described everything and I am definitely subscribing!

I love this! Just the whole idea, the style and just...yeah. It's pretty much an awesome story.

This is perfect !

I haven't commented recently & for that I apologize. I think the story's going really well. (: I don't think I've heard anything about Matt yet, so bring him in? That's be awesomeeeeee. (:

aweee I feel so loved!!!
and I liked this chapter.
it was cute and helped deepen the characters.
ahhhh smart words >.<
I need a cookie
I LOVE YOUS!!

I like this plot! It's different, I like how they're not in a famous band and Brians like hella poor and immortal, lol.
I personally think real GFs would work best but your story, your call, ya know?
Anywhooo, update soon, your writing is boss!