All right, after reading the summary I couldn’t pass this one up. 
I’m still laughing insanely from the cat oneshot, but I’m going to go for this one as well just because of the summary. *takes a deep, calming breath* I have to say, I adore your writing. You manage to convey such cute fluffiness with a hint of sarcasm here and there, and I love it. <3 I would suggest to be more careful with your pauses, however. You have commas in odd spots all throughout this. If you read it out loud you can hear how it pauses in odd places. :) Nothing a quick read-through won’t fix. I have to say, Alex having powers is just…O.o Very unique, and interesting. I love how Alex’s headache is suddenly gone when Danny comes in all dressed up. 
The sex scene was hot. *drools* I love how you made Danny catch the cold at the end. It tied things up very nicely! Great job as always, dear. <3 Haven
I’m still laughing insanely from the cat oneshot, but I’m going to go for this one as well just because of the summary. *takes a deep, calming breath* I have to say, I adore your writing. You manage to convey such cute fluffiness with a hint of sarcasm here and there, and I love it. <3 I would suggest to be more careful with your pauses, however. You have commas in odd spots all throughout this. If you read it out loud you can hear how it pauses in odd places. :) Nothing a quick read-through won’t fix. I have to say, Alex having powers is just…O.o Very unique, and interesting. I love how Alex’s headache is suddenly gone when Danny comes in all dressed up. The sex scene was hot. *drools* I love how you made Danny catch the cold at the end. It tied things up very nicely! Great job as always, dear. <3 Haven August 9th, 2011 at 01:52am