Dance in the Dust - Comments

i love it write more

I really like this. Micheal? Yeah he's fudging cool. XD

Alright, so. I have just devoured this all in one sitting and let me tell you- I AM HAPPY. THIS IS HAPPY MAKING.

Okay that just sounds stupid but really, I really love this. For the most part I'm not usually into twincest, I'll admit it, but I mean- gah! They are so freaking adorable together! How could I not just fall in love with them?

I love how angry Geoff is about... well everything, its pretty damn amusing how much he swears, and his road rage, and how nothing seems to please him. I think it's really cute that even though him and his mom aren't the exact closest mother-son relationship of the year, he still loves her enough to listen to her and respect her with even things that annoy the crap out of him- like taking Levi. I think that shows a lot about him, that even though he's pissy and takes some major convincing he knows where his loyalties lie, and I really like that about him. And his sarcasm- now that has actually made me laugh out loud when battled against Levi.

I love how opposite they are but how they complete each other so well. It's like a parental relationship, the way he has to treat Levi, scolding him and whatnot but Levi still loves him unconditionally.

Levi is my favourite oh my god, how could he not be? Adorable doesn't even begin to cut it, this kid is just like sodhgushdgkjshcviuhdfvohdf come home with me I'm never going to let you leave my side ever. I mean, he says jambes, seriously, how fucking cute. And I think it's cool that he's really just... well accepting of new things, just goes to show how close he is with their mother already and how he opens him arms up to Geoff even when he's being an ass to him, I think that's really cool of him. I really would like to get to know more about his homelike before, you know? With the adopted parents, but I know, patience! And I love how his emotions are so extreme, like extreme sad or extreme pissed.

I must say, pissed of Levi is definitely entertaining. It's like they switch roles when Michael comes around, aha. I mean, look who's swearing now?

I don't know about Michael. I mean... he seems nice... I guess, and there isn't really a reason not to like him at this point, but he's sort of crossing in on the adorableness that is Levi/Geoff, while unintentional, not cool bro. I think Levi only doesn't like him because he likes Geoff. LOVE TRIANGLE! C:

Ah, seriously, this entire story is just amazing, and reading your last author's note made me sad because I just discovered this and I really don't want you to leave! Though, I mean, my opinion doesn't matter much, I really do hope you stay on Mibs.

Well, I'm done wasting your time with my long ass rambles, but I just want you to know that I really do adore this piece and will hopefully, be patiently awaiting updates! :D

Gosh I love this! :D It's not that we hate Micheal. It's just that we hate what he's doing. He's making Levi alllll mad 'n stuff. D: and Geoffrey all love-sick and stupid. >:[

this is soooooooo cute

We hate micheal bc he's getting in the wayyyy. Duuhh. If he weren't a threat then id love him but since he is a threat, I don't like him. No one likes threats.
And I know how you feel with the whole mibba thing. I got bored with it a long time ago once and stopped coming here and kinda forgot about it but then I can back and was like idk why I forgot about this but now I'm starting to go back into not being on as much. I'm getting bored with it.
But,
It was a great update (:

It's not that I dislike Micheal, he just need to go.
I understand what you mean about mibba, I've been trying to find a different site.. I guess I'll go check out this beta site and see about the invites.
I love it, though.
Update soon, yeah?

IF YOU LEAVE I WILL SHOOT YOU DOWN.
AND I'M NOT JUST SAYING THAT CAUSE WE
CO-WRITE!

It's a big reason.. x] but i love all of your stories!
I would marry them if possible. Your writing is too
amazing to just stop.. on here.

If you leave I would find where you live and destroy all
of your game devices. And yes, that means Halo and Cod x]

Nuff Said.
<3

DON'T MOVE. YOU CAN'T JUST ABANDON US LIKE THIS, KRISTEN.
YOUR STORIES ARE THE BEST OK.

aw i kind of like michael
i like levi more though bc he's adorable

Aww I like him lol. I just like levi more:P

Also, Don'tt Leavee. I love your writing :P And if you do switch just use both :)

You should really, really stay. I love this story and even if you do go to the other site you should still stay on Mibba too, this story is wonderful and I (and everyone else who reads no doubt) really want to see what happens. It'll be terribly sad if you go ):
I think the only reason people hate Michael is because he is threatening the awesomeness that is Levi/Geoffrey, haha.

I love Levi most :3

More soon please?

Ah! Thanks... I love you :)

I don't hate Michael. I'm just relatively indifferent. ^.^

Also, *ahem* if you're bored... I miss your comments. T.T

its ok im socially awkward too
(lovely update as well)

Levi is sooo cuteeee! GO LEVI!
Update soon please! :)

Oh my gosh! I want a free cuddle session with Levi!

Nawww little Levi!
Loving the tension in this ;)
can't wait for the next update!

GO LEVI! :)
I'm glad he told Geoff to fuck off, he needs to be nicer to Levi... i mean he is being nicer but not the nicest... :/

More soon please?

Oh and i don't like Michael >=(