Seventy-Two Hours - Comments

This is the first fanfic I have read about The Hunger Games and can I just say, WOW. I love how descriptive your writing is, it's done really well; I would love to read more from you. As far as characters go, this idea was so bittersweet. Lucas cares so much and you can only hope that Lean wins after he pretty much dies for her. Extra points for writing a THG fix because those books are awesome.

I really liked your story. It's the first Hunger Games story I have read. Your descriptions were really good and it was clearly written and easy to read.

It wasn't to clear who your main character was gender wise... and there wasn't much on any of the other characters. I liked the chapter overall.

I'll give you the judging instead then!

I really liked this. DAMNNNN I WANT TO GO READ HUNGER GAMES NOW!!! I've never read them before, but I have the first book, and I think I'm going to start it tonight 'cuz this got me interested xD

Anyways, I liked the narrative for the most part. The flashback was a tad awkward, but not bad. I really liked your descriptions. They were solid, but also sort of dream-like as if everything was just a bit fuzzy. Awesome

I didn't like how I wasn't sure how the narrator was for most of it. We knew plenty about the other girl, and I think you could have developed Lucas a little more.

But overall, I really liked it

Thanks Mags!! <3 Glad the HG fanatic likes it ;)

DUUUUUDE! THAT IS SO AMAZING!
Seriously though; you did an amazing job with this.
I'm in love with it. <3

Thank you so much! haha I tried to bring something new even though you (and anyone who read your original (which was already amazing)) knew what would happen. When I read your story I kind of felt like maybe he knew that there was someone waiting for them. So glad you like it!

So I know it's based off of my own characters and all, but DAMN I loved that! :D It was really good. I loved reading how Lucas felt the whole time because, honestly, I never really thought of it. But it was really good, really sad, but really sweet. :D And I really loved how he pretty much sacrificed himself for her. It was just too freaking sweet even though I knew he was going to die.