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Oaft ! amazing ! hot ! loved it ! i love how brendon was in charge of everything ! was amazing ^^

Ever since way back when on the Panic! thread, I've always trusted your Ryden skills. I saw them in concert just last night, and the fact that Ryan (obviously) wasn't there made me quite sad, and I had to read Ryden, so don't be surprised if I read (and comment on) more of your Ryden oneshots.

This was just... wow. I'm glad I found it. I legitimately have three of your stories open in tabs right now, because I can't wait to move on to some more of your wonderful writing. I just love these so much.

Keep it up, Dru!

I don't read this type of story at all, but it was really (sorry for saying this, but um) hot. You did really well. Usually BDSM shit doesn't go with my stomach, but even though this was pretty fetish-y and disturbing (in a way) I still liked it. I agree with pretty much everything generated anomaly said.

This was very different from what I read usually, but I liked it (like I said). Let me just say, I love how real this story is (if you get what I mean).

Loved it. :)

I don't understand how you do it... I've read a few of your stories before and every single time you always leave me with my jaw hanging open, literally. I never usually have an oppurtunity to read things like this, because it's something that people don't really do. But you can, and you do it really well. When it comes to your work, it's like your writing is so amazing that it draws me in and I can't stop. Even if I am cringing, aha. I can't remember the last time I read something so intense and completely fucked up in such an amazing way. You did a seriously good job on this :)

I read one other of your BDSM before, and I was really impressed, so it was no surprise to me that this one came out just as good.

I envy you because (1) your writing is beautiful. End, and (2) you can write a story that long in two days. For me two days work is roughly 150-300 words, if I'm lucky. So, good job to you and good luck on the contest. ;)

Jesus, Dru. I was going to try to get to bed early to hang out with my fuck buddy, but then I saw that you posted this, so I was just sort of obligated to fuck that thought.

I don't know where to start with this, so I suppose we'll start here:

"You want to be a whore?" Brendon had asked when Ryan started to protest. The older boy had made a noise between a moan and a whimper. "So let everyone see that you're a fucking whore." And then he'd pushed Ryan inside.

Basically, I absolutely adore this side of Brendon. I mean, of course he's always rather dominant, but the bits where he's so savage about it are my favorite. When he quasi doesn't care about Ryan's feelings. And just doms physically forcing a sub to do things just strikes a chord with me. Physical contact in BDSM > orders/mental bondage. If that makes any sense.

The next bit that I love is the way that it all started from a joke and then escalated. The fact that it wasn't just some sex party where Brendon brought Ryan just to fuck him publicly makes it even kinkier, in my opinion. Just the importune way of it. I'm also digging how you don't write out every detail, but it's still detailed enough to more than make it work and to paint the scene vividly.

"You're such a good whore," Brendon breathed, leaning in, letting his lips press against Ryan's bare shoulder blade for a moment. "You just take it so, so well. Like you were fucking made for it."

This line was just... no words for it. I feel like it was almost Brendon actually insulting Ryan by saying he was made to be a dirty little whore, but Ryan taking it as a good thing, completely missing out on what bad connotations the word 'whore' could have. sorryifIdon'tmakesensejustgotoffaninehourshift

And speaking of that nine hour shift, I'm going to end this up by commenting on how I love that Brendon took his own shirt off to wipe Ryan's face (total chivalry, oddly enough) and how I always love the after care scene.

But yes, sorry this isn't longer, it totally would be if I didn't just get off work/have a fuck buddy to hang out with tomorrow. I love this as always though.

I liked this.
No.
I fucking loved this.

Well, this was amazing for a change. :O I've never read anything like it, but hell yeah did I like it. :D

Written in about two days. Just wanted to play around with some voyeurism that focused on the person being watched and not the watcher.

xoxox
-dru