Degausser - Comments

WOOT WOOT! new chapter! I really really liked it. Scene setting was perfect. I read the whole thing without blinking i liked it soooo much!! haha. Logan IS by far the biggest celebrity crush I have ever had. And he is my favorite Big Time Rush singer/actor but James is who Im really liking in this story!!
In my head everything you write about, I can picture a Big Time Rush futuristic television series even though they are the same age! haha!
PS: Im not 21, Im 16 and my name is Hanna not Rachel! Thats why my writing and comments are so gitty and girly! :P

ONCE AGAIN YOUR BRILLIANT

As always, your summary is breathtaking and I can't wait to read the rest of your story. You're so talented.

Oh my goodness, can I just say that this really tugged at my heart strings. The way it was worded made me feel everything, as if I were there. I really feel bad for James, and I'm kind of sad that Carlos is dead. It made me want to cry. All of it was just amazing. I don't think there is any other word for it. You did an amazing job, and I can't wait for this to be updated.

Like I commented to you earlier, I may not be a fan of who you are writing about, but it is certainly the way you have to portray this, and guess what darling? I absolutely love this :)

You pay close attention to detail and that is what I love. You captured me all through the first chapter. I could legit feel his pain and panic as he found his friend dead like that. I can get the whole feeling that you want portrayed and I loved that.

As for a critique? There was not alot that stood out to me. Maybe one sentence:

"At the time, he was constantly longing to be older, to be able to drive or get into a cub" it should be club right? Anyway, that was one of the only things which is still pretty amazing :) We are not all perfectionists and your writing is pretty flawless!!!!

The layout also works perfectly for this and I love it. It is dark and sets the tone for the story :) Definitely loving this and you are very talented :) Keep up the amazing work!! <3

The thing I really liked about this is that even though I have never seen Supernatural or really listened to Big Time Rush, I don't need to for me to understand this story. The way you have written this makes it seem like the characters are all original instead of band members. I have actually never read a crossover before, so I found this rather interesting.

I really liked the first chapter because, to me, it was so dramatic, in a good way. The emotions in the chapter, when he found that his friend way dead, were really… I want to say accurate, but I have never had someone close to me die, so yes. But the emotions were done really well and seemed realistic to me. Anyway, I am sure this story is going to be great from the chapter I read. Good luck!

New Chapter! Hurray! great scene setting. I always seem to sit and read with furrowed brows! haha! I really enjoy this story and I love your beautiful writing even more! Keep Rocking My one and only sock and I can not wait until you post more :D

BRILLIANT!!! you have to keep going with this... Ill never forgive you if you dont! haha :P Completely amazing! its only been one chapter and im in love with it. Keep going! And I compliment your other work!!!!!!!! LOVE it!

The layout is lovely.

Okay, I don't usually read fanfic or crossovers because it just doesn't appeal to me. Big Time Rush also is a band that I just could deal without. But the idea of combining it with Supernatural...well, I will admit that it makes me a bit weary. However, I will admit that the storyline idea is fascinating and I'm sure you can take it far.

Your writing is very good. The way you described things made me picture them quite vividly in my head and I've always liked reading something from a writer that could do that. As nebulas said, you don't leave any gaps in your writing where I'm wondering what just happened. There's no unexplained piece of something you wrote which is a good thing because some writers tend to leave things open and unanswered so you most certainly have that down.

Although this isn't my cup of tea, I do wish you luck and I hope that your story goes far. The way you write in general can make that possible and a lot of people - like nebulas - will enjoy what you're writing so I'm sure you'll have plenty of fans.
Good luck, darling. Your writing is truly fantastic. <3

KAAAAAANDI I'M SO EXCITED. Poor Carlos though :\ You're such a good writer, you use these great descriptions and create such vivid imagery. And what I think that I like most about your style is that you're not afraid to dive into the impossible, you thoroughly go into detail and don't leave any empty spaces in your writing–whether or not it makes sense–and I guess what I'm trying to say is that they're no gaps (like voids of confusion) in your stories. And the fact that you mixed two things I love into one story just makes everything better. But anyway, I'm just really excited to read more of this, I'm sure that it'll be amazing <333