Decrescendo - Comments

Wow, this story just is...twisted and insane.

But so awesome I almost can't describe it.

Once I figured out what had happened, I just sat there for a while with my mouth hanging open.

I was in amazement. It was so cool in fact that it inspired (5 months later :P)

Rhyme Time!

Red dripping,
Fingers slipping,
One sticky key,
From Congealing
Blood
Flowing in a flood
He never changed
His bones now rearranged
Not quite ivory, stained
Trust led him to be chained
Anger was never explained
The voice is gone
But not the song.

*gasps*

Wow, you really don't like Gerard, do you?

Just kidding, but... Wow. This was so morbid... And beautifully written, I might add. The creepy thing is that I could see it all happening. It took me a few minutes to figure it out, but boy, when I did.....

Amazing. As always!

Signature Horsie. Reminiscient of Shatter and Paint Me A Picture and that cannibalistic Frankie fic...

I was actually surprised when he called the piano Gerard, then it all became frighteningly clear.

You have the best oneshots around, I reckon. Such morbid, wonderful, deliberate imagery.

Hah, okay, so I was right. I'm just an idiot when it comes to some things.

Twisted, sick, morbid... everything I like in a story ^_^

I absalutly love it!!!!! :D

This seriously has to be one of the most twisted, morbid things I have ever read. It's like psychotic. But i couldn't expect any less of you. rofl.
The person above me is right, you never disappoint us.
How you think of this stuff is beyond me.
I could see Bob doing all of this though, and it kinda scares me.
I don't want this creepy guy as our President. XDD
But excellent, you had great imagery and just....it was all around amazing.

You're the fucking greatest.

Sweet Jesus.

You never seem to disappoint us, do you, Rex?

So it just happens to be that this was even more than I expected =D. It is the perfect combination of horror, mystery, and just the right touch of morbidity and disturbing imagery to make it the perfect Bob oneshot.

Be proud. Seriously.

Dude, I'm going to have to talk to you seperately about this, but that was awesome. VERY clever. Especially the "some parts were older than Bob himself" bit. Loved it, in a kind of maniacal way.

Dude....that was so good.
*is in shock*

That was amazing!!!!!

dude! That was amazing!!!! I loved it... It was like... Creepy.. paranoid person lol

You made this. You actually made this. Hahah.

A lovely, creepy little one-shot to come back to after a boring day. I'm going to take my favourite parts out;

He had managed to clear them of any living tissue using some bleach, but that hadn’t removed all of the bloodspots. This didn’t bother him, though; if anything, it added a more personal touch.

Nothing like a bit of sadistic!Bob, huh? It sort of leaves the rest to the reader and wonder what, how, and who's living tissue he had to clean off.

He angrily hammered one fist on that high F and G, remaining undaunted as the object shattered and spilled sugar-laden milk all over the keys. More cuts appeared on his hands as shards of glass embedded themselves in his skin searing from the pain and the sudden shock of cold liquid.

That part... is such perfect imagery. Really, it was all happening in my head as I was reading it, and I haven't read anything that gives me that good imagery for some time.

Nice job!