Catalyst - Comments

awwww I love this story probably way too much :D God what a chapter! And I felt like punching Alexia in the nose ahaha
It's sad that the guys are leaving for tour but it's a great opportunity of course! we'll see how that goes out... it's never just a tour! I bet you're up to something ahah anyway
sexy brian is sexy and damn.. he can't keep his hands to himself can he? :p
loved this chapter! hope you update soon

OH YES YES YESSS! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!
I do, I love it so much. I always love the interactions with the friends. Jesus Christ Alexis just leave, I do not like you, just go AWAY. And the Zacky and Haylee are the best, I adore their sibling relationship.
AND THEN BRIAN. MY LORD MAN HANDS TO YOURSELF THERE IS FOOD HAPPENING!
I seriously love this story so much! I can't wait to read more! I am over here like "OH SOMETHING IS GOING DOWN WHEN THE BOYS LEAVE!"
I'm pumped. I want to read more. Work on this more. I am so nagging!

PS have fun in Chicago, I'm talking to you now but I figure I should also say it in this comment

I really want to punch Alexis in the face, just saying. Like, REALLY want to. And the boys going on tour just sounds like it's either going to turn out really, really badly. I loved the update!!!

I am BEYOND happy that those two made up so quickly. I really don't think I could bear watching them fight for several chapters so wrapping that up straight away was a GOOD call. I'll be honest, once she was kicked out of the house and I read the opening of the chapter where it sounded like Haylee was alone, I got really really fuh-reaking nervous because it sounded like she was going to be walking the street and that's when she gets attacked. I was like, "I AM NOT EMOTIONALLY READY FOR THIS YET." So I'm glad it didn't happen that way, even though I know that's coming up soon.

Aww, Brian is such a sweetheart! I love how he's all "I can take the pain, but hate that he hurt Haylee!" So so incredibly sweet that he's so protective of her, exactly like her big brother is to her. Brian and Zacky are so alike in SO many ways, that I think they just don't realise it.

OH OH. And when Zacky says "Don't." and the way you described it as him saying it in such a sharp tone right after Haylee says she isn't anything special, I was even more aww'ing at how quick he is to say that she is special and she shouldn't listen to anyone who says she isn't. TOTALLY AMAZING BIG BROTHER MOMENT RIGHT THERE.

I can't wait to see what happens next because, at this point, I have no clue as to what the next chapter could be about now that the fight has been resolved.

I'M SO EXCITED TO FIND OUT.

Oh god, I must say that I was so bloody worried when Zacky found out! He was so angry! But, that was all blind rage and I suppose, you gotta hand it to the guy- finding out the way that he did wasn't the best way to do so... But, I'm glad that Haylee told him everything, about how she felt. It gave Zack a chance to see that she's 100% serious about Brian. But, poor guy, he was the last to know D: Even though it was so obvious.

I just hope that Trevor doesn't have anything more to do with this story, guessing from the summary and prologue, I think he may... Ugh.

I'm so excited that this is back! XD

Yayay! Glad they made up but i was sure that fight wasn't going to last long anyway! I soooooooo love this story and am very excited for next update!!!! :))))

Awwwwwww, I'm so happy they made up!! jdjsdksajdsklj

I think I knew Zack wouldn't be able to stay mad with her for too long, but he'd make her beg for forgiveness. He's a stubborn one, haha. I liked how Brian got a little pissed too that Haylee had been hurt, the sweety!

"Don't say that shit. You are special and anyone who says otherwise can get fucked sideways." Zack, so sweet..haha.

I think Zack was just angry that he was the last to know, he's her brother, he really should have been the first, but I can see why her and Brian were reluctant to tell him. He would have gotten angry either way, really. And I think he was right in being worried about the group dynamic, too. But I'm glad that Haylee and Brian could convince him that they were being mature and discussing that together.

But enough of that, cause they made up! And everyone is happy! :D But now I can't help but feel like something even worse is gonna happen. I know, from the summary and prologue that something does happen, but things never stay happy and good for very long, haha.

Eager for more! :D

Aww, this was so sweet. ^_^ I'm glad that everybody's friends again. I don't like it when they fight.

Short comment because I'm tired and my kitty is pestering me to come play with him. But this is still one of my favourite stories, and I can't wait for the next update!

I'm so happy that they are ok again :D They love each other and brother should't be mad at each other. I'm glad he's ok with her and Brian too :) Now everyone can be happy and they don't have to hide anymore :D

I absolutely adore the relationship Zacky and Haylee have. I honestly wish I could be that close with my older brother. I'm really glad that he didn't stay mad at her though.

Great chapter. I'm really looking forward to reading more!!!

I fucking love this story so much. Like oh my god can you write a bad chapter? Didn't think so..but I'm glad Zacky decided to let it go! I would not be okay with him getting in the middle of haylee and Brian!

Seriously such an amazing chapter and story! I can't wait for the next one!

Oh thank GOODNESS they made up! I don't like when Haylee and Zacky are totally at odds with each other. I'm so glad they sorted their shit out.

Loved the update dear!

Hey Zacky, Brian called, he wants his pissy pants back.
Like SEEEEEESH ZACHARY CALM DOWN!

But oh man I loved this chapter. The dynamics between everyone! And Brian always trying to diffuse the tension with a bit of joking. I get where Zacky is coming from, but whoa buddy calm down Mr. Pissy Pants.
I LOVED LOVE LOVEEEEED IT!

The relationship between Zacky (which my phone autocorrected to Zuckerberg!!) and Haylee is just adorable and feels so real!! It's an amazing skill you have as a writer where I feel like I am reading about real people and real relationships.

I am glad that everything is fine and dandy between them all again :) I didn't think it would take long because, let's face it, I think Zacky would come across a bit of an asshat if he held a grudge!!

I loved the update ducky!! x

Amazing update, I've become addicted to this story. Can't wait to see what happens.

that was such an amazing chapter, i'm really glad you updated!

okay, super late comment for one of my absolute favorite stories, BUT i'm so happy you updated!

oh man, i knew this wasn't going to go very well, especially with the way zack's temper is in this story. it probably couldn't have gone much worse, with brian being beaten up and now zack being emotionally hurt and kicking haylee out, but at least the damage is done and zacky knows now. he's stubborn as hell and it will definitely take time, but hopefully he'll come around eventually (even though he's the one over-reacting)

OH MY GAHD.

Poor Brian! Sounds like Zacky pummeled the absolute shirt out of him, but props to Brian for being the bigger person and not fighting back. And I want to feel bad for Zacky, I really do, because I can understand why he feels the way he does, but the way he goes about it by beating up his sister's boyfriend was just completely out of line. The way he reacted to Haylee when she said he was controlling by throwing it back in her face about the fact that he allows her to stay with him free of rent, was just cold. I hate seeing Hayley cry though. So I hope Zacky gets over all his bullshit and lets her come back home.

Although I'd also love the idea of her staying with Brian as well - increased chances of more sexytimes between the two.

Every time I read this chapter I'm like "OH CRAP! OHHHHH CRAP!!"
I loved this chapter, it's one of my favorites by far. I love when Zacky finds out and everything just goes to hell. Little jerk, he is a little jerk!
Oh man I just love this story, it;s so fantastic!

Ahaha, I would have loved to have seen the look on Zacky's face, it sounds priceless! And then both of them circling the island, I probably would have cracked up laughing XD

I can see where Zack is coming from, he's just trying to look out for his sister. He doesn't want her to get hurt. BUT. She's a grown woman, capable of making her own decisions. He should really be letting her decide what she wants and be there for her to pick up the pieces if it did fail. But of course, it doesn't work like that. If Zack was actualy using his brain, he would be thankful that it's one of his best friends. Brian's right, Zack does know him. But of course, all Zack wants to do is kill him, haha. I LOVE this story, you have it spot on!

I think Zack was a little harsh there..okay, he's hurt that Haylee lied to him, and for so long, but kicking her out? And trying to guilt trip her? Not cool, man. He's just angry, he'll calm down. But she is right about one thing, he was trying to control her. He might not have seen it like that, people like that rarely do, but he needed to hear it. Hopefully, he will process everything in his own time and realise how much of an ass he was. Haylee should have come clean to him from the get go, he probably wouldn't have liked it, but he would have gotten used to it over time. Lying to him just made it all ten times worse. Hindsight is a funny old thing.

I think they both need time to calm down and process everything, maybe then they can work to fix their relationship.

Can't wait for more! :D