September 9th, 2013 at 08:40am
@ Miss_Somerhalder24
Awe, thank you so much!! I'm so glad you like this story and still read it! It was my first ever fanfic, and I'm so glad you still enjoy it!!
Into Forever - Comments
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April 21st, 2013 at 12:32am
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I just cat deal with Fred's death I've reread this story so many times and I always cry. It's an amazing storyApril 18th, 2013 at 05:21am
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Love the story I read the hole thing today and I cryed so hard and let me tell you nothing makes me cry. So congrats on that. The story was very well writen it is amazingFebruary 20th, 2012 at 09:26pm
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Ok I ll check out it right now ^_^
Hope it's as amazing as this one wasDecember 31st, 2011 at 11:17am -
I cried
I just read the series (if that's what you call it ) and i swear your stories have so much emotion in them I was crying my eyes out
Just wanted to add though I kinda hoped that brielle and teddy would end up together
But yeah I absolutely love your writing so don't stop!!! (^_^)December 31st, 2011 at 10:54am -
Beautiful, just simply beautifulNovember 30th, 2011 at 08:13pm
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^you didn't whore the right story?? I guess it's only for you guys to know...
in my oppinion, you did the story justice with that ending.. even though I'm sad, that the story is indeed finished. I think it ended just right.
I'll continue to be a reader of yours though, since I'm already reading your other story as well. so you won't get rid of me yet x)
THANK YOU FOR THE STORY! =DNovember 22nd, 2011 at 02:25pm -
WTH YOU DIDN'T WHORE THE RIGHT STORY! YOU WHORE! D:< BAAH!
Alright I loved both of the girls' pictures but Cameron looked too young in comparison to Brielle. Not that it's too big of a deal, I suppose. Ehm....yeah. =] GO WHORE OUR STORY ONLINE! D:<November 17th, 2011 at 08:01pm -
Do you have any idea of the amount of times that you've reduced me to hysterical tears??? Now is another one of those times. Oh dear Lordy, that chapter was so beautiful and wonderfully sad. I'm actually crying so much I can hardly see!
You're perfect, this is perfect.October 26th, 2011 at 05:51pm -
I wonder how you are gong to end this.. I really don't know how would want this to end.. probably not at all.. but that is beside the point.. I just don' know what to say right now.. I guess I'm just a bit sad after reading this..October 25th, 2011 at 12:09pm
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LMFAO:
"Battalion of Hufflepuffs"
"like a bat out of hell"
Sooo~ ARE YOU TRYING TO MAKE ME CRY?! WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU GRRRRRRRR
*sigh* so sad. I told you not to kill him. Some people just don't listen *shakes head, turns up nose, then walks away*October 25th, 2011 at 05:44am -
Ive cant wait to see how this endsOctober 24th, 2011 at 08:54pm
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can you say, worst day ever in the history of bad days.. (or something close) can this day get any worse?? wait, no.. I don't want to know yet... but damn... guess that life is going to be little easier. if your worst day ever is over. then everything else won't seem as bad.
also, I wonder if she will get killed or saved by someone (maybe Harry, when awakes).. and at some point I'm actually not that surprised that it is her father.. IDK. I'm hoping for some bad ass fight scene coming this way.
don't think I have anything else to add..October 13th, 2011 at 10:58am -
Figures that would be her dad. Pretty common thing nowadays. Obviously she can't die. Is she gonna kill her dad tho? That would be interesting. Then, she could use the Ressurection stone to "bring him back" and get answers. And she should kill Dolohov anyway. I mean, she already hated him her whole life so eh why not. Oh, or- her father could go all double-agent-superman like snape and fake-kill her with a green spell, then attack the death eaters and go all "this is the moment I've been waiting for!" OR, he could send the killing curse (and this one's the one you'll probably do) and Harry bounces back from the dead and HI-YA! kicks the curse aside with his shoe to save his best friend and the final battle truly begins!October 12th, 2011 at 05:35pm
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omg, i'm crying so hard. this chapter was so sad omfg. no, why?? and kelsey can't die! she just can't! ugh, it was so beautifully written and i'm just in shock at how sad it was :(October 12th, 2011 at 11:07am
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ohh wow! this is AMAZING!!!! I cried so freaking hard when fred died... and oh when she saw her uncle and tonks.. and now harry! and now her dad is gonna kill her!
please please please update soon!!!!!!!October 12th, 2011 at 01:53am -
YOU DID NOT JUST KILL HIM!!!! NO NO NO I DON'T CARE WHAT HAPPENS- MAKE IT A COMA OR A STUNNING SPELL OR WHATEVER BUT BRING HIM BACK!!!!!October 8th, 2011 at 12:02am
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Ok so before I forget, ch 5 was hilarious, ch 7 had yaxley's name mixed for dolohov's and ch 9 had remus instead of romulusOctober 7th, 2011 at 09:28pm
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Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo *takes in deep breath* ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! damn it.. I had happily forgotten for two seconds that he was going to die and it's like boom bam pow... dead.. damn.... I think I will be fine in a moment.. until then I will try and finish my comment..
you wrote this just the way I think I wanted to hear it, still good and I can't wait to hear more.September 28th, 2011 at 08:26pm
ch14- sludgeporn?! Tsk tsk Rachel, so dirty.
Draco’s OOC. I can see Harry being very rude and hurtful, but he’s never been one for physical violence. If he did, it would take a LOT more than that to fuel his temper. He never even punched Wormtail, for goodness’ sake.
It would have just been awesome if Katie had Imperiused Draco into doing that to Kelsey. I remember there being some sort of explanation but can’t remember it. That would do a very nice job of breaking the Only Slytherins Are Bad stereotype.
Excellent use of perplexed.
Ch28- no picture links!!! Broken!!!
Ch31-outfit link
Ch3-(sequel) “And there’s the gorgeous girl that stole my best friends heart!”
“And his sperm,” George added, barely managing to duck the pillow I chucked at him as I hurried over to give Lee a hug.
Hehehe. I also love this very inspiring line: “We’ll show him how powerful the truth can be.”
Ch7-awwww. Potterwatch is so touching.
Ch11-that is SUCH a cute baby!!! Cameron- and I NEVER think babies are cute, those little bundles of poop. But he’s ADORBS.
Ch14- “After dinner, our group moved to the living room, me holding Cameron, Fred holding George, and Uncle Remus holding Teddy on his lap with an arm around Tonks.” LOL- see the error here?
Ch19- Battalion of Hufflepuffs LOLLLLLL
20- Oh my word. I love that final picture of Kelsey- it should have been there more. Cameron looks very much like Fred, but I pictured him with spiky hair in that cute punk sort of way. Brielle is very pretty too. I can’t believe you killed Fred. I know you stayed with the original storyline, but I just…can’t. Going through the memories was starting to make me emotional. The quidditch game was cute though, and Harry being childish with Ron is very amusing. Throughout it all though, I’m glad I took the time to really read and enjoy this over a period of time. There are addicting stories I can’t get enough of, or cliffhangers that drive me crazy- but there are stories I instinctively know are good, and [forcibly] take the time to pour over several days so that it will last longer and I can savor it. This is one of those stories. And admittedly, if the P.O.V. stayed the same as the beginning, I may not have. The status also calls for a change: “Updates Come and Go... Consider It a Surprie :)”