Simple Memory II - Comments

This is so sad. Your Granddad seemed like an awesome dude. Your emotions really come out in your writing, great job. (:

Wow. This is- just, oh I'm stuck for words!
This brought me to tears, literally.
It's so deep, in a simple way.
Your writing skills are good- I like the way you kept it clear and to the point, but yet it hold so much emotion, like every word holds a world of meaning. It's incredible.
And you are so,so brave to be able to write this. You are a very strong person.
Thank you so much for joining my contest and entering this! You did really well, and thank you so much for giving me the pleasure as to reading this wonderful piece of work(:

aww this is amazing; really emotional and real.

dont feel guilty; i do believe that everything happens for a reason. you were a kid, it's in no way your fault

its clear that you guys had an amazing relationship, thats really rare between two different generations =) plus he would be proud of you =)

this is really touching !

i honestly don't think you should feel guilty for not going to see him the last time, to be honest in a way it might have been better you didn't
it's awful seeing someone in their last moments of life. it's awful seeing someone you love and respect so weak and helpless. i don't think you could have changed anything no matter how hard you tried. the important thing is that you two had a wonderful relationship through your childhood and that is something bad luck can never erase

your writing is beautiful and im sure your grandfather would be proud :)

he sounds like he was a wonderful man. i find it is best to keep family close.

This literally made me cry. I can really relate to it because of my dad. He was in the hospital a lot after he had surgery, and I don't think I ever got to see him enough. I really love this.

This is amazing, your ways of writing just catch me and i cant stop reading it. this is so heartwarming and you did an amazing job(: