I really like the summary of the story and the story it's self. I love the layout too. The way you describe things is amazing, and the story is very well written. There are only two things that I noticed. In the second chapter it's hard to tell at first what Thomas's sisters name is. Clary or Carly. The other things was that you use the word 'Latter' a lot. Other than that, I really like this story. :)
August 3rd, 2011 at 03:56pm