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@ GoodGirl;
thanks so much for such an awesome comment! =)
I wrote this because I was interested to see what happened to Angel, so I'm glad someone else is interested as well =P
just wondering, if you've finished reading it now, what did you think of the story as a whole? =D

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Okay, so I've only read the first chapter so far, but it's already drawn me in. I love this and it's such an interesting story. I'm a sucker for main characters with dark pasts!! I try to give all of my characteres those kind of pasts and your story is so unique and amazing and I just love it so far!! I can't wait to read more and the layout is just.. the colors help to draw a character in and I love this!! I'm going to finish it right now! You're an amazing writer!!

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Okay, so I've only read the first chapter so far, but it's already drawn me in. I love this and it's such an interesting story. I'm a sucker for main characters with dark pasts!! I try to give all of my characteres those kind of pasts and your story is so unique and amazing and I just love it so far!! I can't wait to read more and the layout is just.. the colors help to draw a character in and I love this!! I'm going to finish it right now! You're an amazing writer!!

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Okay, so I've only read the first chapter so far, but it's already drawn me in. I love this and it's such an interesting story. I'm a sucker for main characters with dark pasts!! I try to give all of my characteres those kind of pasts and your story is so unique and amazing and I just love it so far!! I can't wait to read more and the layout is just.. the colors help to draw a character in and I love this!! I'm going to finish it right now! You're an amazing writer!!

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I read the first two chapters so far and I really like this so far. I don't want to go into more quiet yet but I'm definitely going to put this is in my library of stories to read in the future. Usually I don't really other stories while I'm writing cuz it just confuses me when I'm writing. But I really like this so far.. I've pictured what has happened so far in the first two chapters which is always a plus, it means that your writing is really descriptive.. and for grammar and spelling errors I really didn't see any which is a good thing. Keep up the good work. I'll be recommending this and putting it in my library to read. Cannot wait to fully read this:D ~Brittany

I love this story its really great. It flows together nicely and is full of details. you should keep writing. I love it so far and I really hope you continue writing on it. A few words of encouragement for you is to just keep going you are Extremely talented. I haven't finished reading but I will finish when I get the time. Great job and Good luck.

This way this story is, is amazing! Extremely descriptive and just full of detail. The words flowed really well; this is just a wonderful piece of work. Keep up the great writing! I look forward to reading more!

I like this. I haven't read all of it, and I don't usually read stories like this but this one is pretty good. I did see some grammar and spelling errors that can be fixed with a read through or two, but otherwise it's pretty solid. The stepfather does seem a little bit stereotypical, but I think he's supposed to seem that way. I also could be missing something because I don't have time to read the whole story yet. Like I said I don't typically read stories like this, but I think I will keep reading this one. Good job.

i love this :) please update soon