Noooooooooooooo i didnt want it to end. i really enjoyed it, very interesting, there was just a lot of more room to go with this and I wish you did more with it. (:
Just sat down and read this whole thing. I loved it, how attatched he is to her was adorable. I thought it was kinda funny how jealous he was of matty and how matty was jerking him around about things near the end. LOVELY STORY! I would absolutely love to see a sequal!
I'd be up for a sequel right now, but I don't know what's going to happen in the next chapter.. depends! Good chapter though! It just kind of irritated me, that Jona didn't do anything when Matt pretty much called Lizzy a quick shag, you know? Keep up the good work!
Awe that was such a sweet chapter. Poor Oli seems so lonely :( I really like Lizzy's point of view. It's nice to see what's going through her mind now. I can't wait to read more!
That was really such a sweet chapter! Oli is already getting jealous(: He's such an adorable guy in your story! I loved the update and I'm looking forward for more!
Aww so adorable! Oli is so smitten with her(: Excellent chapter, I really like this story! There are a few 'i's that weren't capitalized But other than that it was well written(:
That was a great chapter! It was not short at all. I feel so bad for Tom :( trying help like a good brother. I'm so glad Lizzy is turning poor Oli around. I love this story and I can't wait for more! <3