I usually don't read scary stories, but I'm always a sucker for some good build up and tension. It's impossible to skim read this, which I like. Very word and sentence is very deliberate. The only issue I have is that I can't tell if the repetition is attempting to evoke parallelism or just a mistake, so that's my only real criticism. Great job!
November 7th, 2018 at 05:14am