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  • Twistedmutt

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    omg more updates please D:
    November 17th, 2012 at 09:09pm
  • EdgeOfTheSea

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    Lovin' it!
    November 15th, 2012 at 06:22am
  • pizZiCcato

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    keep the updates often...
    November 14th, 2012 at 12:24pm
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    What is happening I NEED ANOTHER!!!
    June 7th, 2012 at 02:59am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    Can't.Breathe.to.amazing!
    June 3rd, 2012 at 03:30am
  • The.Secret.Keeper

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    Very good. :) Just a few spelling errors I'd reccomend fixing. Btw, I'm from Bama so it was awesome hearing that state. Lol. No one ever mentions the little states. ^-^
    May 31st, 2012 at 07:23am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    I love this story oh so much!! Subscribed and waiting for a new chapter!
    May 31st, 2012 at 06:15am
  • MissEL19

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    Wow lovin this story!
    May 30th, 2012 at 05:58am
  • xxDarkerwaterxx

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    Awesome job keep writing^>^
    May 29th, 2011 at 03:03am
  • Sleepy-San

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    Before I even read this, I just want to suggest you change the title. This is like a Quizilla title. It gives away what's going to happen.
    Where as on quizilla you kind of need that cause no one can read a description for your story, you don't need that here. You can just put the fact that your character is in the demon prophecy and is his mate in the short description.
    May 27th, 2011 at 10:57pm
  • ladydee

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    update soon!
    May 21st, 2011 at 09:10pm
  • ladydee

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    update soon!
    May 21st, 2011 at 09:10pm
  • ladydee

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    update!
    May 18th, 2011 at 07:06am
  • ladydee

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    update!
    May 18th, 2011 at 07:06am
  • ladydee

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    update!
    May 18th, 2011 at 07:06am
  • ladydee

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    update!
    May 18th, 2011 at 07:06am
  • CAFFEINE!!!

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    I really love this, but I think you should make the chapters longer, they seem kind of short, but that's just my input. I can't wait to read more though(:
    May 7th, 2011 at 11:03pm
  • xxDarkerwaterxx

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    awesome keep writing a little longer though would be nice more dertail
    May 6th, 2011 at 11:23pm
  • iron underneath;

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    :P I like the idea it honestly has a lot of potential to become a very well written novel but the title throws me off, so I sat here for a moment and came up with a title I thought fit it perfectly. "Demonic Aria" Aria means music and well demonic is self explanatory. I can't wait to read more.
    May 6th, 2011 at 06:22pm
  • SilverWhiteWolf

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    THANK YOU! I'm glad someone likes it. I'm working on the new chapters gradually since I've also got another story in progress as well.
    April 19th, 2011 at 07:10pm
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