Your writing is pretty strong. There are some punctuation mistakes but it was easy to read over. The small details you include in your basic narration really enhances the reading experience. Also your layout makes it really easy to read and stay engaged in reading
Ah freaking amazing. So good. I loved these last two chapters. I am sorry to hear that you relapsed. I know you are strong and can get through it. Just take it one day at a time. Also if you get that feeling that you need to do it or whatever feeling you get right before it does happen think of something really important to you. Think of the people on here who read your stories and that really enjoy your writing. I know that you are really talented and I REALLY enjoy when I see you updated. This story is amazing. Every time I think that I know everything about it you throw something into the mix and I love it. I also am really happy to read that it's gonna be over sixty chapters and there is a sequal. Day equals made. I hope Maria decides to take Matt to the wedding or he surprises her and shows up. That would be totally awesome. I am looking forward to everything. :) Stay strong I know you are.
This chapter is good. Though it is a tad bit flilerish I still really like it. It gives me that look of what every day life is like for them and not just the days when they have drama and don't want things. This shows that they can have normal days of just going to the airport or whatever. I really like and enjoyed reading it. I look forward to seeing what is coming next. :) Zach is still so cute and so is Jimmy. They both remind me of my guy friends and how they are always being like she is mine and not yours or whatever weird thing they do. Anyway I enjoyed the chapter and look forward to the next few. :) Update as soon as possible.
I am so sorry that I never got the connection. It was right there in front of my face so I should have been better at it. These last two chapters were so AMAZING!! I am so glad that Matt was all like shut up people she is a good person. It was really cute of him to be protective that way. It made me think of my boyfriend that I get to see here soon. Long distance sucks! But I am excited to see him. I am looking forward to seeing him be like this because his friends might be a little like this. But getting in a fight will make me a little off to see but I will make sure to take care of him like her. Than the second chapter really having Maria open up to Zach was so amazing for her. I was really happy to hear this and everything. These last two chapters were really amazing. I know that I have used those words a few times. But it is! I just really like this second chapter you added. I feel like I can connect to this. I just have beyond words. I look forward until the next time you update. :) Have fun with all your adventures.